The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
completely agree with the fact that the society should instill the youth with a sense of cooperations rather than competition which is for the greater good for the cconomy and the nation Youth are the future of the nation and trends are changing rapidly, the the sense
of belonging is not only required for the excelling of the particular field in which they work. corroborate to the story in the sport called cricket in early 2000's we had a tournament in which the best players of every country were put together to play against the number I team at that point, even though the rest of the world had the hest players of that sport in a team the team lost, which insisted that even though talent and leadership skills are present the one skill which stands out is the need cooperation this single handedly won them the competition We often see this in many sports that a B players can win matches if they have A team, considering the Coordination
Young minds are required to resolve the new age problems and there should be a sense of cooperation for them to corroborate and work towards a common This is highly fruitful for the entire humanity In the multi national company where mon goal the projects done required multiple skill set the idea to work with a group of who have expretise in the various different domains, these things are also referred as cross domain projects, the typical success of this lies in the fact that they can work people together to finish this particular thing in time This is the need of the hour and this is ka that cooperation/coordination its full potential is required across various domains for this
to function to It's fu considered to be good but there's no bar which dictates the Competition, is fine line between a healthy one and an ugly one, similar thing happened in a small region in India when two youth icons higly revered by the public were involved in denigrating each other rather than focusing on the real issue. This is one such example wherein it's seen that the purpouse of the election is lost in pity battle
Having said this we thing no matter how healthy we define a competition, it has a povidence of turning into something ugly, so we should take the approach of teaching out youth to work in cooperation and finishing the task
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62102689487 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59466544733 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533007334963 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 136.0 23.0359550562 590% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 592.108661199 60.3974514979 980% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 630.0 118.986275619 529% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 136.333333333 23.4991977007 580% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201875213149 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14039780113 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865136424896 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103157288115 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072180589656 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 68.5 14.1392134831 484% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -49.64 48.8420337079 -102% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 54.0 12.1743820225 444% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.7 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.35 8.38706741573 159% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.4 11.2143820225 503% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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