"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising"
I agree with the fact that the awareness about the movies is not reaching general public and this can be fixed in the subsequent years by spreading awareness by creating campains to target the lager audience There are multiple reasons why we don't see many viewers watching the movie in
the super screen one of the possible reason for this could be the fact that the world is
engulfed wiht a pandemic, wherein people are required to stay at home and this could
be one of the reason which are resulting in not many people watching the movie. Recently the movie of the world famous director Christopher Nolan was released in this pandemic and it got great reviews. The reason why it's this way is the fact that the movie is yet to be watched by the general public and this could be the reason why it's highly rated amongst the crites. It's a know phenomenon that the movie critics are exprets and rate the movies based on many different phenomenon, this however is not true with the pedestrian public, this would lead to the system of getting mixed reviews once it's available for the local public
Another reason we need to incorporate while accepting the studies is the fact that is this the general trend that is observed across all the genre of the movies released this year. This would help us corroborate the marketing campaign. Also, noawadys due to the OTT platform like netflix which has killed the movie theater business the directors producers also release the same movie in these platforms and this leaves this to the true movie enthusiasts who specifically go and watch the movies in theater to get an emersive experience.
Based on the arguments presented above we know that the quality of the movies has not dropped the awareness about movies is not well recieved by the common public this could be because of various factors including the emergence of various new players in the market like Netflix, which kills the idea of stepping outside to watch the movie the way it's supposed to be experienced. Leaving only to the critics to write the good reviews, indicatin the quality of the movies
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e-rater score report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 19 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 370 350
No. of Characters: 1721 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.386 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.651 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.313 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.672 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.694 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
I agree with the fact that the awareness about the movies is not r...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...reness about the movies is not reaching general public and this can be fixed in the subsequent...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ience There are multiple reasons why we dont see many viewers watching the movie in ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Be
...uired to stay at home and this could be one of the reason which are resulting i...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...t the movie is yet to be watched by the general public and this could be the reason why its hi...
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Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...hy its highly rated amongst the crites. Its a know phenomenon that the movie critic...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ts highly rated amongst the crites. Its a know phenomenon that the movie critics are e...
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Line 7, column 457, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...re exprets and rate the movies based on many different phenomenon, this however is not true wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 2260.96107784 77% => OK
No of words: 369.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73983739837 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35905329603 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.8473053892 201% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.135791355 57.8364921388 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.625 119.503703932 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.125 23.324526521 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212639700045 0.218282227539 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998172404922 0.0743258471296 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413889010523 0.0701772020484 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111533603804 0.128457276422 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447369363582 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 14.3799401198 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.3550499002 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.197005988 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 12.3882235529 428% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.1389221557 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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