The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or any other fields is by instilling in them sense of cooperation, not competition.
We usually tend to misunderstand the term"Leadership", we think a good leader should be able to direct or command, those who are working under him, be it in government, industry or any other sector. But the irony is, it is actually the quality of any human who is able to move forward along with his/her employees towards the success. I would actually agree with the given statement about the instillation of cooperation in the young ones, to prepare them for the leadership.
In any sector, success or development is possible if there cooperation among the leader and the employees, where people help each other in case of any problem or issue. Which is a very positive step for the betterment of the company or success of any project. For example, few years back there was a devastating and traumatizing earthquake in Nepal, where many people lost their lives and many lost their home. Immediately after the earthquake, many countries from all around the send their rescue teams, health workers and fund for the help. Representative of all the nations were working together day and night, in spite of what relation those countries had with each other, for a noble cause.
Competition always leads to a cold war between any two people or organization. So instilling sense of competition in children will help them to build a concept that, you are the best and rest are not worthy at all. Like in my nation all the politicians think to become a prime minister is like winning a competition, no matter what the duties are and how capable the person is for the position. There is no cooperation amongst the leaders and as a result we the citizens of the nation are suffering as the officials are interested in the position only and not in the development works.
Nevertheless, a healthy competition can enhance the quality of the work. In my locality, when there was only one restaurant, the quality of the food over there was not up to the mark, but once another restaurant was opened the quality of food in the previous restaurant increased because they were afraid to lose the customers, to a newly established restaurant.
Hence, instillation of cooperation in younger ones for the leadership in government, industry or any other field is must rather than competition, for the success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...thquake, many countries from all around the send their rescue teams, health workers and ...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...result we the citizens of the nation are suffering as the officials are intereste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02431404237 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533163265306 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5344331526 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.866666667 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295166438034 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932384558018 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923328043202 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167339351949 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114688405331 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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