The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Must we choose between cooperation and competition to instill young people as the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields? I agree that in certain cases, the two are mutually exclusive. However, in most part of our lives, by using both strategies can benefit leadership the most.
Admittedly, requiring a sense of competition while leading a team might tackle a the whole team's ambition to win. When talking about innovation of science, one scientist may struggle to find new solutions to a specific question, but when there are a bunch of scientists, one's idea can compensate the others', and thus easier to find the effective solution.
On the other hand, when having the sense of cooperation for leadership in each field can aggregate the team's will to make the target succeed. It is indeed extremely important to have great relationship with whom we are working with. Take the most normal ants as an example. Ants are so small and feckless when alone, but when they gather, they can form a great army with considerable strength.
As for the best way for leadership, there is no doubt that melting both strategies together can enlarge the influence of the team the most. The leader's main role is to gather the teams' hearts and simultaneously trigger their will to succeed and win. Thus, it is rather important to instill the young to cooperate and competition at the same time.
In conclusion, though applying cooperation and competition exclusively can benefit leadership to some extent. Nevertheless, using both strategies at the same time is the best way for a society to progress leadership of young people in every field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a; the
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Suggestion: bunches
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, as for, in conclusion, no doubt, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99298245614 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81154459509 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550877192982 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3689055118 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276155411672 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955960862041 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119890467977 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170702597097 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112702189222 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.