Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is it true that it is important to know about irrelevant events happening around the world? When it comes to this question, the answers vary from individual to individual. Some argue that those events will not affect our lives, so it is not necessary to know, while others think that it is our duty to know what is happening around. Both the opposite arguments appear to be convincing and stand to reason, yet my personal experience and real-life observations have led me to conclude that it is definitely crucial to know what''s happening in the world.
To begin with, knowing such events to an extent can help us to begin a conversation with other people. With that knowledge, we will have more topics to discuss with others, which will make us seem like a wise person. Or else, when meeting with other people, it will be very difficult to be chatty. Take my experience as an example, that I was really fond of reading magazines about all fields, including science, literature, and even politics. Because of this hobby, I can easily come up with a topic to start a talk with others. On the contrary, without that information, the conversation could have ended awkwardly.
Secondly, the events happening around the world can sometimes be important when we need to travel. In other words, if we are going to a foreign country, we will even encounter danger without knowing those incidents. For instance, some countries in Europe may have protests arising, if we are aware of this news, then we can avoid going to those areas. However, if we do not know anything about it, then we might end up being hurt by some radical protesters.
Last but not least, knowing those events can also help us when we are going to take a life-changing exam. Exams often have questions relative to some events happening in the world. If we keep an eye on those, this can effectively aid us when we are thinking about the answers. Once I was taking the most important exam in high school, I encountered a question that I once read about in the magazine. It surprisingly helped me to get rather good grades.
In conclusion, given the reasons above, I strongly believe that we should always be aware of what''s happening in the world. That is not to say that the other opinions are completely out of merits. Nevertheless, I believe my points of view I have provided are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70783847981 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63680639285 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527315914489 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4920939558 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31818181818 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214543981343 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694857484663 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637892925571 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124428625478 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620413473759 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.