Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As society has changed at an unprecedented rate, life in modern society can be extremely complex. Especially, when it comes to the topic of whether it is essential for an individual to require the ability to plan and organize, it is very debatable. After deliberating over such an issue, I agree with the statement noted in the question due to the following reasons.
To begin with, in this rapidly developing world, information from worldwide are constantly bursting out. Data and knowledge have multiplied at an extraordinary rate. Because of this, we should require the ability to gather and organize the information we obtain. For example, when our boss asked us to search for relevant data about a client and assemble it into a report. If we don't have this capability, then we might have lost our jobs.
Secondly, this sort of ability allows us to control our lives better and independently. Since society has become so complicated these days, the knowledge to take control of our lives seem more important than before. For instance, if we got this ability, then we can organize our daily lives by effectively scheduling our time. Nowadays, the world won't approve of people who dream their time away.
Lastly, it is also considered to have the ambition to keep learning no matter how old we are. This allows us to keep our hearts young and face the world optimistically. Indeed, this attitude of life also needs us to have the ability to plan and organize. On the other hand, if one has lost his eagerness to learn, then one might be eliminated soon by the rest of the world.
In conclusion, given the reasons above, I strongly believe that the ability to plan and organize is definitely essential to our lives in this rather complicated world. That is not to say that other opinions are completely out of merits. Nevertheless, I believe my points of view provided above are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86102719033 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76271392629 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6021397059 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6842105263 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194173235432 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557314822516 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045756946137 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105479348418 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512889240731 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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