"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
Leadership encompases galvanzing people to achieve a desired purpose or common goal. A good leader is one who inspires and motivates his subordinates to bring out the best in them and carry out the set task. For a leader to excel, he/she must also be a good follower, listener and embrace the different ideas or background of the people, showing empathy at all times.
The society has a huge role to play in moulding leaders that will truly represent the people and stir the wheels in actualizing the objectives of the society. As such, it has to employ the best mechanizing in ensuring noble and accountable leaders emerge from the vast pool of hoi polloi, and go ahead to support the leaders to succeed. In the light of this, the chosen leader has to serve as a unifying factor across all societal lines and heritage. A leader who is capable of unity his/her people, making them work as one, stands a better chance of achieving a better and sustainable result. In line with the old saying "if you want to go far, go together, but if you want to go fast, go alone", the society that desires a long term success and seeks to lay a solid foundation for the future generation to utilize will emphasize on instilling in her leaders the sense of unity and cooperation, togetherness and oneness, because this unification factor will project the society into the desired success that will stand the test of times.
Also, cooperation ahead of competition promotes peace and ensures no one is excluded in an environment, thereby paving way for a homogeneity in purpose. Although competition helps people present diverve opinion and inspires creative thinking, it most times brings about disagreement and disunity among people. Some develop a sense of rivalry even when it is unnecessary thereby fostering retrogressiveness ahead of progressive indulgence. A united people tends to achieve tremendous success ahead of other people, divided across lines. Take the case of America, who over the years, stand up as one and support each other in times of trials and tribulations. This makes them conquer and succeeds in all endeavours.
For a government, industry or any organization to soar and achieve the desired success, her leaders needs to be constantly encocated with the sense of cooperation and unity, peace and progress.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97692307692 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83495718636 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.4749487949 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199184404584 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595833884916 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03956955658 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122418274009 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275260269683 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.