The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Many people believe healthy competition is helpful to achieve goals in life and competition prepares oneself. However, I believe that cooperation is more helpful than that of the competition. To prepare young people for leadership in different fields we must teach them how to cooperate with other people. One should not motivate young people to compete each other, it is not healthy for leadership. Hence, I agree with the statement that the best way to prepare young people for leadership is to teach them how to cooperate with other people.
First of all, leadership in government, industry or any other filed demands good cooperation with the team members. Leader must understand the needs of the team members. Leader needs to cooperate with the team members. There is no place for competition. Cooperation is something that can be tought during the early age. If a child cooperates with thier classmates
Secondly, competition does not create a good environment to work with. Competition creates stress and pressure. Competition in early age of young people may cause harmful effect on their delicate minds. For exapmle, if parents of a child force him to score more than his friend who is much more intelligent than he is. This competition will put the child under pressure. If he could not score better than his friend will create an inferiority complex. The child will start believing that he is not good enough. So, he will never apply for leadership role.
Lastly, leadership requires great amount of confidence and confidence come form different life events. Leader should also possess skills such as cooperation and understanding. These skills are developed during the early age of children. Parents and teachers can motivate young people to cooperate with each other. For example, if two friends decide to preapare for an annual examination instead of competiting with each other, will be beneficial for both of them.
In conclusion, competition will not shape young children to become future leaders. Leadership in government, industry, or any other field demands cooperation. Hence, the best way to create future leaders is to teach them how to cooperate and to understand other people. Parents and teachers should not motivate their child to compete with other people because this will cause harmful results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10372340426 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6304240239 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425531914894 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 376.0 23.0359550562 1632% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1919.0 118.986275619 1613% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 376.0 23.4991977007 1600% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 117.0 5.21951772744 2242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426049217222 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.426049217222 0.0831039109588 513% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260202907714 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124130950134 0.0667264976115 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 190.6 14.1392134831 1348% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -310.16 48.8420337079 -635% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 149.9 12.1743820225 1231% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.78 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.64 8.38706741573 294% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 152.4 11.2143820225 1359% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 191.0 11.7820224719 1621% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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