The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
The scientific researches and achievements of country's leaders and artists represent the country's greatness in the world. But the achievements of artists and scientists are not a truest indicator of the country's greatness. If one needs to judge a country's greatness, they should measure it based on the lives of general people of the country. Hence, I agree with the statement that the surest indicator of any country's greatness is the general welfare of its people.
Firstly, the greatness of the country can not be directly determined by the scientific researches and artistic works. Many countries have reaches the apex of the scientific research and artistic works but still they fail to provide basic needs to general people. When India had successfully launched the Chandrayana-2 on the moon, it was one of the proudest moment for India. Many countries had praised India for successfully launching of Chandrayana-2. However, this scientific research alone can not determine the greatness of India. The scientific research is only an external indicator. There are many citizens of India who can not even feed their family a one time of food. More than one percent of citizens of India leaves under the poverty line. So, if one wants to measure the greatness of a country, they should see the living conditions of general people of that country.
Moreover, life expectancy of any country is also a strong indicator of welfare of the people. Because it is somehow directly proportional to the healthcare services and living conditions of the country. If a country provides good health services to almost all people of the country without any biasing, the life expectancy of people will increase. Another major factor of life expecatncy is the living conditions. If general people of a country have access to good food and water everyday, it will increase the overall life expectancy.
In conclusion, scientific researches, artistic works and achievements of rulers are just an external indicators of the greatness of the country. The living condtions of general people of the country are the truest indicators of the greatness of the country. How successful is the country to provide basic necessities to the unpriviliged people defines the greatness of the country in a truenst sense.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1051212938 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81089302166 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388140161725 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 371.0 23.0359550562 1611% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1894.0 118.986275619 1592% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 371.0 23.4991977007 1579% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 5.21951772744 1552% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26154367636 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26154367636 0.0831039109588 315% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195982896753 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121676720331 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
automated_readability_index: 188.1 14.1392134831 1330% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -305.09 48.8420337079 -625% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 148.0 12.1743820225 1216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.84 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.68 8.38706741573 294% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 11.8971910112 471% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 150.4 11.2143820225 1341% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.7820224719 212% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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