The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wi

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Leaders are meant to provide people direction. They are supposed to understand and evaluate the needs of the people and contrive a plan accordingly. Having a sense of cooperation can be an asset in the journey of a leader. While competition is inevitable in the pursuit of leadership positions, one must be mindful of the impact of their post. This mindfulness can be inculcated by instilling in them a sense of cooperation. Therefore, the best way for society to prepare young people for leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.

History has seen so many great leaders who won people's hearts through cooperation. They compaigned for what the people wanted and united everyone. Consider, Mahatma Gandhi, he is the exemplar of leadership. He led India to Independence through his non-violent methods. He believed in cooperation and first brought everyone togather because he knew that in unity lies strength. If his mere aim was to compete with his contempraries, India might not have been an Independent nation today. Leaders must be mindful of the solemnity of their position and must not treat as place of power which can be used for their selfish needs. Therefore, by instilling a sense of cooperation a leader becomes more aware of how impactful their post is.

Primarily, a leader must cater to the people. In order to do so, he must understand the needs of the people and evaluate the steps to be taken to fullfil their needs. Young people in the pursuit of leadership often forget this. The power of the position entices them and they forget their inspiration for pursuing the leadership postion. When young people are taught to be cooperative rather than competitve they percieve the leadership position as an opportunity to make the world a better place rather than a means to become more powerful.Therefore, instilling a sense of cooperation can help young people retain the true meaning of leadership.

Having said that, competition is inexorable in the pursuit of leadership. So, being exposed to competition can be helpful to young people. They can cultivate the qualities to combat the obstacles while competeing for the position of leadership.

Competition is an enormous part of becoming a leader. The first step in the pursuit of leadership is competition. Not much has changed in that aspect from the olden times. Whether one establishes superiority by bagging the maximum votes or by slaying all of their competitors, competition is everlasting in the pursuit of success. The true essence of leadership lies in one's ability to cooperate with their people and this quality is what sets them apart. Therefore, instilling a sense of cooperation in young people is the best way to prepare them for leadership position in any industry.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07205240175 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99357718412 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445414847162 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9117258255 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9642857143 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258402069914 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778476971043 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969603632682 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171615172825 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593968999227 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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