Technology while apparently aimed to simplify our lives only makes our lives more complicated Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo

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Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Technology has completely transformed the way we live. Clearly, teachnology has revolutionized every industry wheather it is automobile, e-commerce, banking, finance technology is at the rescue. Therefore, technology has definitely made our lives simpler.

Technology has definitely made our lives easier and simpler. We live in times where time is money. We are always racing againsst time to meet or deadlines and get our work done. Technology has in in fact been a boon in our lives. It helps us complete multiple tasks at the touch of a button. Technology has had such a enormous impact on our lives that we simply cannot live without it. It helps us complete our daily tasks with ease. In the times before technology, one had to go to the grocery store or the shopping mall to buy things they wanted. But today, things have changed e-commerce websites have made our lives so much simpler.

More than anything, the greatest assest that technology has given us is access to a plethora of information. We are fortunate enough to be able to have the resources to learn anything with a mere click of a button. Technology has made learning more creative and interesting. Learning has become more accessible.Have a question? You can "Google it", and have your answer in a matter of seconds. There was a time when people had to travel to the libraray and search tirelessy to get precise answers but now, with the internet the process of gaining information has become almost effortless. We don't appreciate the small ways in which technology helps us because we don't remember a life without it. It gives us the ability to communicate with anybody on the entire planet and not long ago the thought of that possibility seemed like magic to many.

While technology has made our lives convinent, it has also restricted our outlook. People consider technolgy as the only source of entertainment and forget to really go out the door and explore the vast world before them. So, I would say that it has made us less indepenpendent and self-sufficient.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, while, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93371757925 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89064362698 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550432276657 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0742980751 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4347826087 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227515737119 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069513456217 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603646999573 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135935216975 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239978189384 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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