The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The youth of today is enthusiastic to learn new things. This learning is often fueled by a zeal to be better than their peers. This competitive environment drives young people to have a sense of direction in choosing their career and encourages them to build their knowledge and hold command over their specific field of research or profession. Their expertise and attitude would contribute to them winning a leadership position in this super-competitive world. Competition is hence, quite necessary to drive the youth towards not just learning, but also developing new technology, art and forces them to stay atop the hierarchy and enjoy the benefits of power.
That said, it can't be ignored that society, as a whole, is based on the principle of cooperation and community bonding. For a society to develop, it requires strong leaders who can envision and deliver on their promises. A leader's command and the ability to direct people is a product of competition and the desire for continuous learning and innovation. But power alone won't suffice to be a good leader, leadership demands listening to your people's woes, listing out the possible solutions, consulting experienced peers and then ultimately making a calculated decision.
To understand people, a leader needs to empathize with them, Through compassion, a leader should chalk out all the consequences and then based on this holistic approach, choose the best solution.
One can easily relate to sports for example. The captains of any team are in that capacity because of their personal achievements and also because they displayed a sense of comradeship with their teammates. A captain takes on every match understanding the strengths of each of his players, analyses the situation, and basis the inputs suggested by his teammates and team managers, decides upon the best game plan to win that match.
Similarly, a democratic nation provides its general population with a set of competent leaders, who are expected to work in a harmonious manner and govern the nation with a sense of belonging.
This sense of belonging and working with peers as well as the Opposition can be developed only when cooperation as a virtue has been instilled right from the early days of learning and can be taught through a variety of exercises, projects and group sessions so that the Leaders of tomorrow are first listeners and then doers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...he benefits of power. That said, it cant be ignored that society, as a whole, is...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a harmonious manner" with adverb for "harmonious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...etent leaders, who are expected to work in a harmonious manner and govern the nation with a sense of b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14066496164 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87855951458 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585677749361 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0031230572 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208859439389 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618290998695 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441507023321 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853886976538 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398942827385 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.