The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
As the author’s claim that only considering positive points of an individual is an unsound thing as only considering positive things may lead’s to ignoring the weakness and history teaches us that ignoring the weakness’s lead certain individual into detrimental or fatal situation.
Taking an example of a cricketer who has a fear of bouncer deliver ball, just by ignoring his/her weakness does not accomplice him/her as a complete cricketer as taking a preventative step on weakness help an individual to achieve something extraordinary in life.
Weaknesses are not confined to an individual but also an organization were the loopholes are recognize and preventive steps are taking an examples of an company were the sales are decline recognizing the lacuna and weakness regarding the marketing strategies, operational strategies, can help an organization to increase its sales.
Weakness is a part an individual were nobody is granted any mercy every individual has certain kind of loopholes or lacuna which he can carried forward with or can work on it to as author’s claim that one must only consider the positive point of a person and ignore the negative one’s that seem that person should just only on their positive points but negative points are as warrant as negative ones and it offers the individual with an opportunity to convert their negative points into positive ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her weakness does not accomplice him/her as a complete cricketer as taking a prev...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recognized'.
Suggestion: recognized
... an organization were the loopholes are recognize and preventive steps are taking an exam...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an example' or simply 'examples'?
Suggestion: an example; examples
...cognize and preventive steps are taking an examples of an company were the sales are declin...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ventive steps are taking an examples of an company were the sales are decline reco...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'carry'
Suggestion: carry
...ind of loopholes or lacuna which he can carried forward with or can work on it to as au...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33035714286 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08281475461 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 23.0359550562 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0660580018 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 298.5 118.986275619 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 23.4991977007 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.21951772744 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133570057238 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803592388665 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690231695908 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803592388665 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690231695908 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 14.1392134831 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 48.8420337079 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.1743820225 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.2143820225 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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