As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of
humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
In recent centuries, humans have developed the technology very rapidly, and
you may accept some merit of it, and you may see a distortion in society
occured by it. To be lazy for human in some meaning is one of the fashion
issues in thesedays. There are many symptoms and resons of it. However, I can
not agree with the statement that the technology make humans to be reluctant to
thinkng thoroughly.
Of course, you can see the phenomena of human laziness along with
developed technology in some place. However, they would happen in specific
condition, not general. What makes human to be laze of thinking is not merely
technology, but the the tendency of human that they treat them as a magic stick
and a black box. Not understanding the aims and theory of them couses the
disapproval problems.
The most important thing to use the thechnology, regardless the new or old,
is to comprehend the fundamental idea of them, and to adapt suit tech to tasks
in need. Even if you recognize a method as a all-mighty and it is extremely
over-spec to your needs, you can not see the result you want. In this procedure,
humans have to consider as long as possible to acquire adequate functions.
Therefore, humans can not escape from using their brain.
In addition, the technology as it is do not vain automatically, the is created
by humans. Thus, the more developed tech and the more you want a convenient
life, the more you think and emmit your creativity to breakthrough some banal
method sarcastically.
Consequently, if you are not passive to the new tech, but offensive to it, you
would not lose your ability to think deeply. Furthermore, you may improve the
ability by adopting it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...in some meaning is one of the fashion issues in thesedays. There are many symptoms a...
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Suggestion: Thinkng
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Suggestion: Developed
...henomena of human laziness along with developed technology in some place. However, they...
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Suggestion: Condition
...owever, they would happen in specific condition, not general. What makes human to be la...
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: the; the
...hinking is not merely technology, but the the tendency of human that they treat them ...
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Suggestion: And
...that they treat them as a magic stick and a black box. Not understanding the aims...
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Suggestion: Disapproval
...he aims and theory of them couses the disapproval problems. The most important thing to...
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Suggestion: In
...them, and to adapt suit tech to tasks in need. Even if you recognize a method as...
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Suggestion: an
...need. Even if you recognize a method as a all-mighty and it is extremely over-s...
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Suggestion: Over-spec
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Suggestion: By
...ot vain automatically, the is created by humans. Thus, the more developed tech a...
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Suggestion: Method
...creativity to breakthrough some banal method sarcastically. Consequently, if you a...
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Suggestion: Would
...he new tech, but offensive to it, you would not lose your ability to think deeply. ...
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Suggestion: Ability
...ply. Furthermore, you may improve the ability by adopting it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94557823129 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80163937913 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1701879398 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111880442586 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356864384632 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046211724009 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0350437876224 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04753325006 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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