Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible
Corporations can be viewed as both beneficial and bad. This statement addresses
both views that many people have about corporations. Views come from personal
experiences and is the reason why some people like corporations and why some
people do not.
Half of this argument deals with people that like the idea of corporations. Some
people believe that corporations help stmiulate societies and promote the well being of
society. These people are ones that have never encountered a corupt corporation. Just
like in any other aspects of life, people can get images of something as being good if
they only brush the outside. It isn’t until they are being faced with a problem within a
particular corporation where they either work for them or have just dealt with them.
Also, people that are benefited from corporations are obviously going to like the idea
of an corporation.
The other side of this argument is that many people believe corporations are just
money hungry. This can be seen in many corporations throughout America. Many
small business owners will side with this argument. The problem lies that this is
corporate America and the little businesses are being taking over by larger corpora -
tions. As Mark Twain once said, “The vast amount of money is only in a couple of
hands”. This statement still lies true today. In addition, corporations are large and with
that being said they lead to more lines of coruption. In small buisnesses, the owners
can oversee their store entirely. Can these corporation owners really oversee every -
thing that is going on? Ask any employee at a corporate office if they believe their
workplace is being ran how they think the corporation would want it. One is likely to
find the answer that it is not.
Just like any other issue there are two sides to the story. The problem with this issue
is that most will agree that corporations are only there to make money. They don’t care
about the people that are helping them make money. They only care at the end of the
day how much money they made.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ney. They only care at the end of the day how much money they made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54206006084 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490028490028 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1561885941 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2083333333 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.97078651685 503% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322781768886 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930008660954 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740054654762 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966418885573 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689049625373 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.