Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible
I think corporations have a responsibility to not only follow the law but also work with
the societies and enviroments they are in. Our societies and environments in this age
are affected by corporations’ operations. An example of this is BP’s accident in the Gulf
of Mexico — they might have been following the law and regulations, but once an
accident happens, our societies and environments are affected. Many fishermen and
businesses around the area have been affected by the accident. Now BP faces so many
liabilities and needs to pay money. As a result, they are loosing more than they made
in the past.
It is also important that corporations makes as much as money possible. If they do
well, there might be more employment opportunities for people and more taxes for the
city, states and federal which help our country’s economy better.
However, there are always choices that corporations can take and they can make
money by promoting the well-being of the societies and environments. It might cost
them more but it will also help to save thier expense
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...by the accident. Now BP faces so many liabilities and needs to pay money. As a result, th...
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... they are loosing more than they made in the past. It is also important that c...
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...ations makes as much as money possible. If they do well, there might be more emp...
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...ies for people and more taxes for the city, states and federal which help our coun...
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...eties and environments. It might cost them more but it will also help to save thie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 58.6224719101 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 2235.4752809 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16574585635 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.55969084622 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08673197546 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9905198972 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25347555089 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944377543865 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701665254388 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854725153053 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542202728182 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.