Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should address both of the views presented.
recently, global companies donate to some nonprofit organizations helping pernicious people. some people view these behaviors as one of the advertisements to promote their product, while others evaluate these companies’ charities as a helpful movement for our society. Further, some argue that corporations have a responsibility to increase the well-being of societies and the environment. I partially agree with this opinion for two reasons. nevertheless, I also assert that companies’ staple objective is to make money.
First and foremost, since companies are also members of society, they have to contribute to their society. Of course, it is natural that many corporations always make a plan to increase their benefits. however, their most benefits also are from a society; all companies would not survive if members of society show a boycott of their product, service. For example, let’s suppose that one company have gradually raised their sales in 20-years. Due to this business success, the manager of the company became an affluent person in society. nevertheless, considering that his success was merely from his capabilities, he determined to move his companies abroad to decrease tax without the plan to return their benefit to society. if many people heard this news, they would reprove his behaviors because they regard the company as also a member to contribute to their society. they might think of its behaviors as betraying their reliability. it is not surprising that many global corporations, nowadays, donate their benefits to societies. this movement is generated by the idea that companies’ benefits are from society.
Second, some companies might implement another responsibility: the protection of the environment. A lot of companies in the world exploit a resource in nature. In the process, it is unavoidable to destruct the environment. therefore, some people perceive that these companies must show a contribution to protecting the environment. recently many companies answer this demand. For example, aramco, the national oil company in Saudi Arabia, recently make a plan to invest environment-friendly products like cars using electric or bio-fuel energy. With this movement, aramco tried to promote a positive image that they also have a broader vision to anticipating a change of energy spending, and gradually tried to protect their environment to pursue alternative energy. Consequently, a lot of people support the direction of aramco’s policy, while other companies also realize that protecting the environment did not merely mean a loss of sales. therefore, protecting the environment would be not only a desirable contribution to society but also a favorable option for the companies.
however, all companies exist to make a profit for their companies’ survival. therefore, if a society or government requires companies to play a bigger role in a society’s well-being or protecting the environment, they must feel a burden and escape to another country. For instance, tax is one of the forms for companies to contribute to society because a government increases their society’s well-being using tax. As is well known, if a government demand companies to pay a high tax, some companies move to a new salubrious place to pay lower money. therefore, a compulsory requirement might not desirable for a society.
In conclusion, it is desirable to make companies feel their responsibility to contribute to their society. it would be a favorable choice for both companies and society. however, requiring companies to participate in increase social well-being and protecting the environment, would be not a good option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3172.0 2235.4752809 142% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59435626102 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29280627304 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435626102293 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1011.6 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6440028919 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.71875 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142213481412 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466745387469 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445495092069 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100733299803 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284708058993 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.