To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
the author asserted that to study the important characteristics of the society one must study the major cities. However, at first glance seems logical, as major cities are the important part of the country which give the country recognition and status tehfurther evaluating the facts it can not be solely depend upon the major cites as whole but also the bucolic part. Similarly, characteristics of the society is depend upon the various factors that need to be considered before genelizing that the major cities are true reflection of the characteristics of the sureys and .
Firstly, the author claims that the chracteristics of the society cna be understnad by studying its major cities it might be true in certain condition but not true for all condition for instance to study the educational status and students populace characteristics one might study the major cities because major cities have more educational institues and facilities than bucolic or rural part they can extensively perform surveys to the largge populace to understand its educational cultural. similarly to undertand the poultry one might to take cconsideration of the particular area were poultry is perform. eventually, by evaluating the design significant to that country it becomes helpful to understand the insights of the poultry.
Secondly, major cites are the region which face more migration than rural part as most of the population migrate for jobs, education or due to more opportunities. they face more diversed populaace than any other part in country therefore, they might be a combination of culture and tradition. therefore to undrrstand the true culture and tradition of the country one might perfer rural parts as most the rural part is untouched with the foriegn populace and hence to understand the customs and tradition of the country one might perfer rural part.
Thirdly, there are many instances were understanding the real tradition and customs become arduous therfore one might considered the factors carefully and meticulously for the study and to decide which part need to be considered for the study either bucolic or major cities, as bucolic parts are the regions were foreign populace are less and the chances of customs perservation is more as compare to urban part. similarly to take instanes of the business and foreign export one must consider the urban part.However, some might argue that in particular country the culture is omnipresent but it might not be compulsory as the education system and curriculum can differ from part to part and similarly, business in particular can be different for instance, the area rich in the orange farming have more orange business tahn any other business therfore it can not be genelized that the country have orange as main business fruit
Conclusively, to understand theculture of the country one must considered the factors carefully and than should decide whether to study rural part or urban that might help to get prolific results about the culture of the country as whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2548.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21063394683 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85389319568 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.38854805726 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.976254267 60.3974514979 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.636363636 118.986275619 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.4545454545 23.4991977007 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 5.21951772744 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259807605434 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127496329166 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134855856177 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165956978083 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784292810063 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 14.1392134831 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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