The best way to understand the character of a society is to

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The best way to understand the character of a society is to

The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines
A society is a complex composition of multitudinous factors complementing each other. It is therefore to understand a society, it is imperative to make a comprehensive account of all these societal elements along with the study of the characteristics of some of its heroes and heroines. I therefore personally disagree with the given claim for the following reasons.

A society has a myriad of factors that governs its activities. The factors like population distribution, social values and beliefs, religion, culture, profession, educations and the like so have direct role in social activities. This diversification in the social parameters would lead to multiple numbers of heroes within a single society and it would be difficult to study the characteristics of all these heroes. Further, it is not compulsorily true that a hero chosen by a particular group of people should be a hero to other group of people of that society. For instance, a certain political leader who gives high emphasis on the agricultural field and makes magnanimous contribution for the well-being of farmers could be a hero to the farmer group. However, the same political leader could be a villain to a group of business person if he collects those funds by imposing high income tax to the business person. Similar will be the cases for the other group of people. This diversification in the societal parameters leads to multiple numbers of heroes and heroines, the study of whose characteristics cannot give a coherent idea about the characteristics of a society.

An individual is regarded as a hero when he/she makes a huge contribution for the well-fare of society and the development of nation. However, it does not mean that the characteristics of such hero should reflect the characteristics of society. For instance, Mother Teresa is regarded as one of the great social hero due to her magnanimous contribution for the welfare of the peoples who are in need. She has devoted her entire life for the well-being of peoples such as, orphans, physically and mentally disables, senior citizens, sick, poor and handicapped people. However, the people of same society who regard her as a hero do not have a single penny to feed the poor, the people of same society do not have a single minute to look after their old-aged parents, the people of same society do not have a single drop of water to satiate one’s thirst. In this case how one can say that the characteristics of their hero reflect the characteristics of that society?

Similarly, there are numbers of female actors and actresses such as Kareena Kapoor, Katrina Kaif and so the like from Islamic society which they regard them as their hero. However, it does not mean that the female of Islamic society are free to think and act like their heroes. In fact, the females from Islamic society still veil their head when stepping out from their home, and they are not allowed to choose their profession according to their want and desire. Furthermore, a society rife with corrupt people and officials regard their hero as Karl Marx, a society rife with violence and fight regard their heroes as Mahatma Gandhi, and a society rife with prejudice and inequality regards their hero as Abraham Lincoln and Nelson Mandela. In these cases how can the characteristics of the heroes reflect the characteristics of societies that regard them as their heroes?

In conclusion, I am in compete disagreement with the claim made in the given statement.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3041.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 611.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97708674304 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9812079349 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42062193126 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 982.8 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6447089064 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.217391304 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5652173913 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181921599389 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537738124915 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102877692027 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141214305778 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192135306549 0.0667264976115 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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