Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I strongly disagree with the statement "all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is" .
Some people think that no matter what the field of students is, they should be required to take history courses because history gives student a sense of the past. However, I disagree and believe that history courses should not be required to take to all students. I will support my viewpoints with three reasons.
First of all, it should not be required to take to all students because it may inhibit their learning. All the students may not like to take history courses, some of them may feel it unncecessary burden, as a result it may deteriorate their concentration. For instance, one of my highschool friends was very interested in Mathematics, but he had no interest in other subjects. Once, our high-school made compulsory to study history courses. My friend never passed the history subject, additionally was distracted by the history courses and he could not able to accelarate his Mathematics subject. Moreover, he irritated by history courses and later left the school.
Second of all, history courses should not be required to take for all students because it may not be useful in the future. For example, I'm very much interested in Computer Science. If our college makes history courses mandatory for me, I think it does not hold water. Since, in future, I will work in Computer sector where there is no meaning of history courses, it would be a waste of time. In contrast, if I focus in Computer science, develops skills related to this field, it will help me to succeed in the future.
Third of all, history courses should not be made mandatory to all students becasue it rises student's expenditure. It is possible that all of the students may not have enough money to buy history books. For instance, when I was in junior college, our college made us an extra course compusory in which I had not interest in. Since at that time, I was very much interested in Mathematics, I had already spent a lot of money to buy so many Mathematics books. I did not have money to buy the coursebook of that extra course. As a result, later I got failed in the extra course.
To conclude, the subject whether all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is, is complex. Some people believe that history gives student a sense of the past, so it should be mandatory. Nonetheless, I still contend that it should not be required to all students because it may hamper their particular field of study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, still, third, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80794701987 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6533833582 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417218543046 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2478328727 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428188954061 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141951439198 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14406559546 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302281069045 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14050264253 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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