A brilliant new idea seldom comes from just one person; instead ground-breaking new ideas develop when people with different perspectives can meet and interact.
The inception of a world-changing idea conforms over time as slow hunches rather than a sudden epiphany. The relentless quest to find something forms the pathway to a ground breaking discovery. When we look back at history we always see that the most life- altering discoveries were made by individuals rather than a group of people, this occurs solely because of the lack of belief. Let me elaborate, most of the inventors we venerate today, have been shunned in the past for thinking differently or out of the box, but that didn't stop them from making their thoughts and ideas a reality. It is this belief and faith in their invention that leads them to a ground breaking discovery. So, I believe that a brilliant new idea can absolutely stem from just one person and remains unaffected by new people and their perspectives.
A thought or an idea can be translated into reality with the right amount of energy and time. But, one thing that is more important is to truly believe in yourself. This relentless obsession of translating thoughts into reality has contributed to the many wonderful inventions we enjoy today. Every successful inventor has had absolute faith in their invention even when they were told otherwise. Consider Alan Turing, a British mathematician and cryptanalyst. During the Second World War, Germany used the Enigma machine to encrypt their battle messages so the enemy couldn't decipher the message even when they intercepted them. Alan Turing believed that only a machine could compete with a machine. His idea of building a machine to decrypt the Enigma encrypted messages was looked upon as a waste of time by his colleagues and peers. He still went on to build his machine and after he successfully built his machine, he led the Allies to victory in the Second World War. His invention shorted the war by two years and saved thousands of lives. Therefore, faith in one's idea is sufficient to make a lasting mark, other people's opinions are usually a projection of their disbelief or prejudice and provides no positive impact to the invention.
Opposing perspectives have a disastrous affect. Consider Galileo, a Greek philosopher who's discovery shattered the then belief that the Sun revolved around the Earth. This discovery was antithetical to the blinkered belief of the Catholic Church. The Church officials hanged him because he refused to change his belief. Opposing ideas, more often than not are inimical to one's growth and can have a catastrophic effect much like what happened to Galileo. Sometimes while exchanging contrasting perspectives the conversation gets heated to the point where the fact of the matter is forgotten and the conversation is more focused on vilification. Therefore, exchanging opposing perspectives are more harmful than helpful.
Having said that, the exchange of ideas can prove to be useful as long as the opposing perspectives are exchanged in a respectful manner and every statement is reinforced with logical explanations. Sometimes, being exposed to opposing ideas can get rid of any mind blocks or dogmatic beliefs one may have. It can even provide a fresh perspective to our problem. So, if opposing ideas are exchanged with the right intentions it can be an asset to the inventor.
A brilliant idea most often comes to a single person not because of their innate knowledge but because of their unshakable faith in their idea or thought. Persistence and perseverance bring thoughts and ideas to life. Having, conversations can help galvanize someone to make a ground-breaking discovery but not contribute to the discovery itself. Therefore, a brilliant mind with an unquenchable thirst to translate his or her thoughts and ideas to reality is all that is required for making a ground-breaking discovery.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3189.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 620.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1435483871 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98996985923 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91117683632 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 215.323595506 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 1002.6 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4993279521 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.65625 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285440819759 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663699768107 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745784982098 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159895120159 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784292134677 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.