Claim: In any situation, the best way to persuade other people is to present them with facts and statistics rather than with emotional arguments.
Reason: Facts are objective, so they are more persuasive than subjective appeals.
This issue of whether best way to persuade others is by presenting them with facts and statistics is a contentious one. By showing facts and evidentiary proof it is easy to convince people rather than just by emotional or mere words. Facts are like universal truths which cannot be denied as Sun rises in the east which no one challenge it or replace it. Whereas emotions can challenged and questioned as they are linked to feelings and thoughts of people.
Indisputably ,In some situations emotions should be given much importance than facts. Positive emotions such as hope are important in life of everyone and may help to persuade people to overcome adverse situations of their life.
Nevertheless ,Facts are statements that can be used to persuade other people because no one can deny facts as they have concrete evidence. Much effort is not required and without any doubt people have the tendency to accept facts without any hesitation.
Thus ,I generally disagree with the opinion that emotional arguments are more persuasive than facts in persuading people. As People correlate emotions with feelings and instincts, whereas facts and statistics are viewed are viewed as truths which cannot be altered.
Primarily, Let us consider the case where a school has introduced new curriculum and wanted to check the results of the students in the exam. If the statistics indicate that students have improved their score on an average by 40 percent than no one can deny the fact that the new syllabus was a success.
Furthermore ,Facts are undeniable as we have solid evidence in support .For example: We are yet to decide whether a product is success or failure based on the quality so the company has distributed free samples to its employees. By conducting the survey the company can gauge the positives and negatives of the product beforehand. The management will be cautious enough to modify the product before launching it to the market or may even cancel the product if the product seems to a failure.
Admittedly, There might be few cases emotions may play major role to persuade people instead of facts. Let us consider a situation where you have a tough choice to choose one person over other. The government does not have sufficient funds to allocate free house to everyone than it prefers the most vulnerable people on priority basis because here emotions supersede the fact that everyone is equal under the government. In this cases emotions play a major role than facts.
Thus , in sum even though emotions can appeal to people but it is always facts and statistics that should be used to persuade people in any situation and in any place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61469743477 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4335951812 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401131632568 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12121002741 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1021417425 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188106004639 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104473727978 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.