Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
The statement was drawn out from multiple disciplines. Where role models and heroes were considered at same level. Role models can be from multiple backgrounds, eventhough achievement for a sportsperson was completely irrelevant for industrialist like Elon musk. Each have specialised in what they do in their own way. Similarly heroes swished their wands in multiple facets. If we look collectively all efforts build the ideals for the society.
The statement attempts to bridge that character of society is to understand the character of chosen heroes and role models in that society. Heroes are known for their work in making the society a better place. Who can inspire others to progress towards a better life by walking the same path. Whose vision is to achieve betterment by instilling strong ethic in others by being the hardest worker in the room. Dwayne Johnson has been a phenomenal asset in portraying what a hero looks like and was a great support system by creating opportunities for youngsters from his new brands. Mawi community has been endorsed by the actions that Dwayne takes up.
Furthermore, Individual efforts from role models inspire a segment of people who rigurously work to expand the limitations of the society and creating a better platform and difficult targets to break. Shaping a new ideal for the society. These role models work in different disciplines making it a vast choice for society to choose between.
However, heroes and role models are ideals of the society which always doesn’t give clear picture on characteristics of the society. Real society struggles are hidden in the race to run to be ideal. Focus oriented goals are more relevant and idealistic in a social setup rather than discussing on actual real world problems which revolve around, Hunger, poverty, access to medicine and fresh water, these points are overlooked by just considering the ideals of Heroes.’
Heroes provide ideals and represent the community in the wake of sacrificing and being the hardest chap in the room, and to add role models set benchmarks in mutiple disciplines creating a amalgamation of study on the society’s focus streams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...lised in what they do in their own way. Similarly heroes swished their wands in multiple ...
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Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k in making the society a better place. Who can inspire others to progress towards ...
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Message: “Whose” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a better life by walking the same path. Whose vision is to achieve betterment by inst...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...chmarks in mutiple disciplines creating a amalgamation of study on the society’s ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17897727273 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7940626154 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 107.095218392 60.3974514979 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.277777778 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333111887117 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107074059954 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112245269945 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191098162125 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295621944905 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.