Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Society is a group or collection of people living together. These people may or may not have like minded thoughts. I do not agree with the claim that the best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes just because some of the them reveal a society's highest ideals. I would like to explain my thesis with following three examples.
To begin with, let us the take case of United states of America (USA). USA is obviously a very well developed nation and most of its development has become possible because of the intelligence of the people who live in the country. They invite students from other parts of the world and provide them enough opportunities to learn and also provide them employment. Now, this same people elected Donald Trump as their President who is treated as a big clown by many people. Hence, the hero elected in this case by people is just a clown who is given that position just for personal advantage of some tech giants and not a true inspiration for the people living in the country. This is very well established by the English company named "Cambridge Analytica" also.
In addition to this, if you consider different heroes from the history, be it fictional or real, everybody has some or other heretic characterism displayed. He is generally not the hero for that generation, but can be a hero for the coming generations. Galileo is a very good example for this. He's the one who proposed the Heliocentric Theory stating that sun is the center of Planetary System. He was However condemned by many of the orthodox people who follow rules and traditions set by churches. He was imprisoned too, which clearly means that he was not considered a hero of their times. However, as Science evolved and developed it is proved that the guy who once was treated as a dogmatic person is now the hero of many people and he is definitely not the best representative sample of his time.
Also, let us take the field of movies. Most of the people in society do like movies and they do admire actors and actresses for their performance on screen. However, no parent generally doesn't want his/her child to become one among them and go and have secret lecherous relationships with multiple personalities out there. One adores actors for their performance im movies only and not for their societal behaviours. Therefore, in this case also heroes cannot be described as a best representatives for in the society's character.
However, one might argue that people like Isaac Newton and Albert Einstien have inspired so many people. It is also true that they were not able to influence many people who are not interested in field of Mathematics or Physics. In conclusion, it can be seen from the above examples that people in different parts of the society have different interest and their heroes are generally different and it is not true that a hero is the best person to be examined to grade a society's character.</span><br>
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...iety chooses as its heroes just because some of the them reveal a societys highest ideals. ...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...oses as its heroes just because some of the them reveal a societys highest ideals. I wou...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
... just because some of the them reveal a societys highest ideals. I would like to explain my thes...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...y named 'Cambridge Analytica' also. In addition to this, if you consi...
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Suggestion: He's
...alileo is a very good example for this. Hes the one who proposed the Heliocentric T...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...on screen. However, no parent generally doesnt want his/her child to become one among ...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...case also heroes cannot be described as a best representatives for in the society...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2564.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 529.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84688090737 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98393898277 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47258979206 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 827.1 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0677397528 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.56 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.16 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210610950251 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557967078286 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128746556597 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140101645832 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133078600997 0.0667264976115 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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