Claim the best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society choose as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Claim:the best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society choose as its heroes or its role models.
Reason:Heroes and role models reveal a society’s highest ideals.

Nowadays, many people believe that the best approach to realize the character of a society is to examine the character of both the men and women that the community chooses as its heroes or its role models since they reveal a society's highest ideas. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this idea. Although heroes and role models represent a nation's highest ideals, it is not wise for a country to only choose heroes and role models to understand the society's character.
First of all, I concede that either heroes and role models reveal a society's ideals. The reason I want to express is that heroes and role models must do something that has influenced the whole nation or is important to the development of the country so that they behave as the model to represent a country's ideals. For example, in China, there is a province called Sichuan, which is famous for its fine wine. It got its name because there was once a poet who loved to drink and wrote a lot of poems about wine. Therefore, this man, as the representative of this region, shows the tradition of local people who love to drink. Moreover, Bill Gates has created tremendous wealth. As a representative of the society, he not only founded his own company, but also promoted the innovative development of the entire country. Hence, he shows the will of society. As a result, from what has been discussed above, we could come to the conclusion that heroes and role models reveal some parts of a community's ideals.
In addition, I think that heroes and role models may not reveal a society's highest ideals for the reason that some heroes or role models could not reveal each aspect of highest ideals so that they could not reveal a nation's highest ideals just some parts of highest ideals. For instance, we see some influenced individuals in our lives. They may donate money to the poor, invent new things, save people in danger. Even though they have done some useful things to a society, we cannot admit that they must represent the highest ideals of the nation. Because the highest part is not measurable and not easy to get. Hence, I think that both heroes and role models could only reveal some faces of the highest ideals, not the whole wills of a society.
Finally, apart from examining the character of the people that society selects as its models, there also have other ways to examine the character of a society. One method that could be considered by some to be the best is an examination of education. The education level of a region represents the development potential of that region, so education highlights the talent and development characteristics of a society. Another way is to examine the environment of a community. If a society has a good environment that is pretty appropriate for people to live in, then it will reveal that this region is good at protecting the environment. However, if some places are destroyed by human activities, then the people who live here must possess a rough place. Therefore, all these factors will play important an role in examining the character of a society.
All in all, in addition to examining a society’s role models and heroes, many methods are available to understand the character of a society such as education and environment. Although some heroes and models are an effective way to show a nation’s ideals, other aspects should not be ignored.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
... or its role models since they reveal a societys highest ideas. As far as I am concerned, I disa...
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Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...though heroes and role models represent a nations highest ideals, it is not wise for a co...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nations the highest'.
Suggestion: nations the highest
...ough heroes and role models represent a nations highest ideals, it is not wise for a country to...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
...heroes and role models may not reveal a societys highest ideals for the reason that some heroes ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...ole models could not reveal each aspect of highest ideals so that they could not reveal a ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...st ideals so that they could not reveal a nations highest ideals just some parts of highe...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nations the highest'.
Suggestion: nations the highest
... ideals so that they could not reveal a nations highest ideals just some parts of highest ideal...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
... nations highest ideals just some parts of highest ideals. For instance, we see some influ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2796.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 589.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74702886248 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64066125367 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409168081494 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9116175749 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8148148148 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59259259259 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501577448121 0.243740707755 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126520896773 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156311980672 0.0758088955206 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332383418694 0.150359130593 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158064660464 0.0667264976115 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments