Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The cities are considered to be the economic indicators of a nation. They are developed and provide a heavy revenue for the government. Hence, I agree with the claim that a government must provide sufficient financial support to its major cities and also the reason that the claim is based on, stating that the cultural traditions are primarily preserved and generated in the cities.
Firstly, the cities are heavily populated, people migrate from different parts of the country to the city, mostly for their personal development. However, to fulfill the needs of these large populations, government's must provide them with the required infrastructure. It should be able to provide the people with basic needs like transportation facilities, electricity, water supply and other facilities. Hence, a government, whose aim is to serve the people, should provide it's major cities, the required financial support.
The major cities in a country is comprised of a myriad number of tax payers, as compared to other regions. Since, a city is a developed area with a greater cost of living, people living in such places, are usually involved in high paying occupations and therefore can contribute largely to the government in the form of taxes. Hence, the government should pay the citizens of a city back by ensuring the major cities, the financial support they require. This will help them function in their jobs without any hindrances and therefore further contribute to the nation.
As stated in the above points that cities are comprised of a huge population that migrate from various places and hence, it is also a conglomerate of divergent cultures and traditions. This diverse cultural values in a society can lead to a healthy competition among the cultural groups and It is proven fact that a healthy amount of competition can be constructive, so these cultural groups will make attempts and thrive to preserve and generate their respective cultures. Hence, ensuring the well being of people residing in the cities can also account for the preservation and generation of a nation's cultural traditions.
This competition of cultures can also be hazardous when it crosses a certain limit. People in an attempt to achieve hegemony over other cultures, can take part in malicious activities which can do more harm than good to a nation. For example, most of the mass killings in the world are instances of some cultural groups who wish to achieve absolute dominance over other groups. Hence, in order to prevent such repercussions, one must ensure that these competitions among various cultures do not take the wrong turn.
Hence, government must definitely ensure that the major cities receive the financial support they need and also cities can ensure the preservation and generation of the culture and tradition of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15652173913 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83519935587 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9166664977 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.842105263 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2105263158 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388408144252 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124167298724 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130669727036 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249314978901 0.150359130593 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159057438545 0.0667264976115 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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