Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Over the past few decades, many suburbs have developed into cities. World have been a global village; people throughtout world are conected by various social medias, other various tehnology. The author a claims that governments should ensure a regular provision of finalcial support in order to thrive. In order to butress his claim he provdes reasoning as that cities are the primary centers where nation's cultural traditions are generaed and preserved. I mostly disagree with the author's claim and reasoning. However, in some of the cases the authors claim and reasoing can prove to be valid.
First of all, cities are economic hub; economic activities and financial acivties are predominantly carried out in cities. So, cities are less likely in the eed of financial suport in order to thrive. For instance, Mumbai is a very large city. Huge financial and eonomic acivities are carried out there on daily basis. So, they are defnitely not in need of finanial incentives to sustain and thrive. Whereas, taking consideration of a small village elucidates the economic condtion of that particular area. SUburbs and rural lands are neither hub of economic activty nor financal acivities. So, instead of cities suburs are in exigent needs of financial support to thrive.
Secondly, cities are the predominant areas where trends are set and burgeon throughout globe. Cities are the places where trend are readily accepted. so, we can definitel argue that cities follow global trends and global culture and thus they cannot be a primary places where the nation's culture and tradition are preserved and generated. For instance, kathmandu is a capital city of Nepal, any trend followed globally or accepted globally is for the first time accepted by people of cities and then it passes on to the individuals of rural and suburbs. In most of the instances, cities instead of preserving and generating nation's culture and tradition are more into eroding it.
However, there are some cases in which a city s a major hub of cultural traditions. raditional cultures and valuers are preserved and passed on to generationsa and continued on. For instance, chitwan, a city of Nepal is built or promoted in a way to attract tourists and exhibit tradition. he indigenous tharu people have been conserving their tradition and culture at the same time making their living out ouf the same activity.
In sum, the reasoning provided by the author to bolster the claim is not as persuasive to the extent to bolster or buttress his claim. I mostly disagree with he authors claim and resoning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uthors claim and reasoning. However, in some of the cases the authors claim and reasoing ca...
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...anial incentives to sustain and thrive. Whereas, taking consideration of a small villag...
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...laces where trend are readily accepted. so, we can definitel argue that cities fol...
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...ey cannot be a primary places where the nations culture and tradition are preserved and...
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...attract tourists and exhibit tradition. he indigenous tharu people have been conse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08254716981 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64653224446 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497641509434 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7241648165 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.96 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351028663653 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903375052397 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776642093643 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167422094918 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463443983697 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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