College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Imagine a person studying a subject not of his interest the whole life. He may be able to complete the course but will not be able to excel at it. I believe that studying a course of one’s choice is very important.
To begin with, choosing a subject of one’s interest will make him do the course with more dedication than merely passing it. For example, a student is forced by his parents to choose a certain field of course in college. Despite not being interested in it, he may sit in the class and do all the coursework. He may also get good marks but at one point, he will be frustrated and will want to leave the course. Therefore, it is necessary for a student to be interested in the subject he is learning.
Furthermore, interest in the subject will let him to go beyond the course. A student will be able to make inventions only in subjects he is really interested in. This will lead to an inner satisfaction and fulfilling career of a person. Could Sundar Pichai had been so successful if he had studied any other subject? So, subject of one’s choice only can lead to a good career.
Some may argue that without jobs it is not possible to make a career. Job is the source of income and without money life is nothing. It is possible that a person can create jobs with his skills. It is also possible that the knowledge gained by those subjects can be used in some other job. It is often said that knowledge never goes waste.
To sum up, it is nearly impossible to succeed if one studies a subject of one’s choice.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...ly can lead to a good career. Some may argue that without jobs it is not possible to...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...subjects can be used in some other job. It is often said that knowledge never goes...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, of course, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36713286713 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4694648486 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.2083533153 60.3974514979 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7368421053 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971242466913 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035949319999 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229845206062 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572608678761 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215942173073 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 14.1392134831 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 12.1639044944 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...ly can lead to a good career. Some may argue that without jobs it is not possible to...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...subjects can be used in some other job. It is often said that knowledge never goes...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, of course, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36713286713 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4694648486 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.2083533153 60.3974514979 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7368421053 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971242466913 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035949319999 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229845206062 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572608678761 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215942173073 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 14.1392134831 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 12.1639044944 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.