College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
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As the professional world tends to spiral in a direction of uncertainity, a good consideration for a college major is key to having a fulfiling career to most young adults. A major key factor a student needs to consider is the availability of jobs within the field they are interested in delving into. This is a crucial decison as it would affect their total net productivity, health and finances both now and later on in their careers.
In recent times, automation has threatened many jobs and the trend doesn't seem to be going away anytime soon. Based off this, it is tantamount that students should take time out to carefully study the industry and job market. This should help them align themselves to a fulfilling career. Studies have shown that evry year, due to the innovations in software, new, unheard job opportunities, that weren't heard of in the past decades are now springing up and becoming more popular. A careful research into current industry trends should infrorm students properly.
Although its arguable that some specific job roles are transient, and even though they are new would soon go extinct, it is also important for such students to focus on majoring on a field that provides them with enough background information. Knowing the background helps keep them realevant in the industry for longer and helps them to change jobs easier down the line. A good example is majoring in software engineering, as it gives the student a broader knowledge base, as opposed to majoring in 1 specific programming language which can be less popular in future years. With programs like accelerators and bootcamps, students can gain more knowledge about the industry and make right career paths early enough.
Furthermore, from a finacial standpoint, setting ones self up for suceess based on availability of jobs in a field is a smart financial move. It is also encouraging to know that one can still be passionate about any field one finally chooses, because at the end of the day, a job remains a job. Passion is built over time and can only be sustained when you have a job and a career to be passionate about.
In conclusion, students need to make right career decisions and a deep careful consideration of the current industry is very important. Visiting a career coach, attending industry events and speaking to industry experts can help them make this choice easier. But overall, its a very important decision and shouldn't be taken lightly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... has threatened many jobs and the trend doesnt seem to be going away anytime soon. Bas...
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Line 6, column 398, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...e, new, unheard job opportunities, that werent heard of in the past decades are now sp...
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Line 6, column 482, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'careful research'.
Suggestion: Careful research
...springing up and becoming more popular. A careful research into current industry trends should inf...
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Line 10, column 166, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
... financial move. It is also encouraging to know that one can still be passionate about ...
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Line 12, column 273, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...m make this choice easier. But overall, its a very important decision and shouldnt ...
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Line 12, column 307, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...rall, its a very important decision and shouldnt be taken lightly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00630252101 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95344465512 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2521121881 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.476190476 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37165887242 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108256117666 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134887774442 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1821077729 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168751138938 0.0667264976115 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.