Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
As a student, I hold the position that all faculty should only do their own jobs which are related to their major. such as teaching students and some other researching about the area they study. Here I'll give some of my reasons.
first, if faculty are forced to do things that they are not familiar with, they won't be good at them. For example, the first chairman in china is a militarist, but after he has concurred the whole country, there are a lot of political jobs to do and he didn't do it very well. As for faculty, they may not do their jobs as good as some others who are familiar with these areas can. And this may lead to a bad situation such as student could not be able to gain the knowledge they want.
Second, faculty may lose their own specialized skills when keeping doing things which are not related to their major. there's a famous person named Yao Wei in china, and he is so good at writing poem, once he was caught by army and become one of them for over a decade. when he came back and start writing poem again, he finds out he couldn't write even a single word. so do faculty, if faculty doing things which are not related to their major, they may lot their personal skills about what they teach.
Third, it's a waste of time and resources to let people to do things they are not familiar with. As a book which is written by a Chinese doctor Chao Heng says, our society needs us to be skilled in order to save resources and be more efficiency. if faculty are trying to do things which they are not skilled enough, there will be a huge amount of waste in time and many other kinds of resource such as money.
All in all, I'm against the policy that faculty should working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, well, as for, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36119402985 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11558200868 2.79657885939 76% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6367819906 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177271982263 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738931668942 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104065675773 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152181895603 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145537528776 0.0667264976115 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 48.8420337079 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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