Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach. Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In today's modern world, experience parallel to knowledge plays a pivotal role in every person's life. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among academician as to whether faculties need working in off-campus milieu besides teaching in universities or spend all their time in academic environment. I personally, concur with the former. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
it is crystal clear that having experience besides knowledge help professors to be up-to-date. they can transfer their experiences to students which help them in their future job. world is progressing with a galloping rate, so faculties must be aware of the last changes in the world to convey these transformations with their students. In other words, universities should encourage their faculties to work outside the university to keep pace with industry and work environment. By doing so, not only are professors fashionable that is important for high-ranked universities, but also students learn the last methods which help them to find job conveniently.
Secondly, industry can take the advantages of the professors' knowledge and use it for its progress. Undoubtedly, industry without knowledge of the experts cannot make the headway toward success. In other words, finding efficient and fast ways with minimum wastes to do tasks and producing products is very important in today’s modern world and faculties researches can give benefits to industry in this matters. this clearly demonstrates that the combination of artisans and researchers play a key role in country's development.
last but not least, professors can introduce prospective students to industry or enterprises when they have relation with outside the university. today, many gifted youths suffer from unemployment because they do not have recommendation from a well-known and authentic person. For solving this problem, faculties could assist both graduated students and artisans to be in touch with each other. prospective students eager to being hired in huge and well-known companies and enterprises wants to hire talented and motivated youths. faculties are the best choice to introduce students and companies with each other.
All in all, I really believe that universities should require professors to work off-campus. this is because students should learn applicable things, industry needs the knowledge of scientists, and both companies and students can become familiar with each other. Wouldn’t it be a failure if industry and academic milieu work separately without any cooperation?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63291139241 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07241449228 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53417721519 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5223070793 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.952380952 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8095238095 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157219315303 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485428232799 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595895422148 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968837644892 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459842459048 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.