Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been engaged in great struggle whether his life is important or society should progress. Some people believe that people should think about their benefits rather than those of the whole society. others, however advocate the idea that every person in given society have to sacrifice himself or herself for other people in society to have utopia world. I personally concur with the former. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
To begin with, in today's modern world, all people have hectic life and do not have any time to spend on helping their communities. young people get up early in the morning, go to work and come back home late at night. they do not have any free time to share with others even their family member. they want to become successful in youth, so they spend their whole time on making money, boosting their knowledge, forming a family to name but a few.
Second, These days people do not care about others as much as themselves, so they do not see any need to help society. In other words, they have a one dimensional characteristic which says individual prosperity is more important than society's success. they think they are responsible to themselves not to their communities. they believe that youth does not repeat again and they have not to lose their time with helping others. Noteworthy statics reveal that people tend to do their work first and if there is any excess time allocate it to help their intimate friends and family member and there is not any space for foreign people in every person’s life. they are busy enough not to think to other's difficulties. This is clearly demonstrates that young people do not give enough time to help their communities.
To sum up, young people do not pay attention to their communities on the grounds that they prefer their advantages to other people and they have quite a lot work all day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83727810651 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46426261698 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5705551717 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1764705882 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263369142722 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105606169901 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978919082213 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175381456072 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731709314001 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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