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Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.

Student life is indeed the best part of our life to learn, to accept and to ponder on unknowns. This time is very precious as what we learn in this time will be forever embedded in us. This is the time where one’s mentality as well as personality is shaped. The prompt suggests that colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in foreign country. I mostly agree with the prompt argue that it will be very helpful for the students for two reasons. However, I do concede that every student has different ability to adapt at new environment and sometimes it can be very hard for few people to spend a quite long time as a semester.
To begin, this world is not a small place and there are people with different skin color, height, religion and culture around us. If we don’t know them, two things could happen. Either we feel inferior to them or feel superior to them and hold a false pride which can be racial or cultural supremacy. But, in real world this is not the case. We all are same. Hunger, pain, hopes are the fundamental of human nature and they are borderless, colorless and don’t follow any particular religion. So, what can be a better way to teach this universal fact than to experience one. International student program is the best way in my knowledge to push this cultural and racial barrier. For example, a white student from Europe where he has little idea about the black people from childhood were sent to Senegal or Ivory coast for a semester. There he will learn to accept the difference between the people and be more respectful and take it by heart no one has become superior just to because of the skin color they possess. This example illustrates how sending students to different countries would serve a noble purpose by promoting equality among the students and thus shape their mentality in a better way.
Secondly, there are few issues whose effect lies in a cross-border nature. International student program will help the student to understand a certain features in one country effect another country thousands of miles way. For example, a fashion student in USA where fashion or new trends of clothes is kind of a big deal if sent to Bangladesh where most of these garments are made, he will understand this fast fashion trend actually are the fruit of child labor, underpaid labor, poor working condition etc. This will be a great lesson for him when he goes back to his country. Another example may be of regarding understanding the visual effect of climate change. If a student from a relatively less disaster prone, high carbon emitting country came to Bangladesh or Maldives, he will understand and experience how mother nature pays it back to human a rough and tough way. This will be forever in his mind and when he goes back to his country he will work and take decision in a more incisive way. These two examples illustrate how important cross border issues can be better understand and by international student program.
However, I do concede that some students may feel uncomfortable and may found very hard to adapt in the new environment due to climatic condition or food habits. Like a student from India who is vegetarian sent to middle east or any other country where he couldn’t adapt with food habit, it would certainly be very difficult for him. This small example portraits that there is certainly some barrier to this broad idea of international students and the implementation is not as easy as it theoretically as it contains problems faced by individual students.
To conclude, though having some backlashes, the importance of sending students to foreign country is much more logical and good decision to promote big and critical objective like racial equality, mutual respect, understanding cross border crisis etc. And tackling these issues are surely are the more necessary than any other things.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, for example, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3248.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 674.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81899109792 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0952438579 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61136194895 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46587537092 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1018.8 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8857010948 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216312253412 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600513790544 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138441559409 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120573636909 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928599954038 0.0667264976115 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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