As far as my concern, studying in a foreign country would benefit most of the students of colleges and universities, while if it is a reqirement, I would not like to accept this propose in that not every student would be suitable for studying abroad due to their individual conditions. However, I contend that the colleges and universities should encourage their students to do so as the chance to see the world, with the help from them. I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, it is a golden chance for almost every student to study abroad. In one semester, the student would get the innitial impressions on the foreign country as well as the university. As an exchange student studied in Dubai University, I disvoered lots of exotic cultures there as well as the adcanced studing in my area. The local people prayed for five times a day for their god-Allah. Also, I realized that it would be possible to build a major city between the sea and desert. It was a great expreince for me, also it would be the other students who studing aborad.
However, I should admitt that I was fund by my university while there were not enough fuding for everyone who would study aborad. So the finacial issues would be the problems of both the unversities/colleges and students. On one hand, not every student can afford to study aborad due to the high expense. On the other hand, it would be a burden of universities/colleges to fund every student, or it is impossible. Thus this requirement of every student would not be feasible. In that when we disscus the policy for every one, we should take many factors into account. Students from differnet families would face various problems when they are studying in the uiniversities/colleges, also, their intends would be different, why not to encourage them to experince this kind of studying rather than requirement?
Finally, there should be a solution for this issue, as I disscussed above, the universities/colleges should not require every student to study aborad for a semester. In stead, they should provide some help or service to the students who would like to study abroad. As my concern, Studying is a procedure of recognizing oneself, recognizing the others and the society, it is an individual business. If a student do not want to study in this way, the schools should not askd them to do so in that there are many ways of learning knowledge. On the other hand, the universities/colleges should do their best to inspire the students to go aborad in that the conditions of these high-education institutions varied.Moreover, the scholarship for studying aborad would be another catalyze for these students who really want to study aborad while obstacled by their current finacial condition,which they have to compete for.
In conclusion, the high-education instittutions should not require all the students to study aborad due to the individual conditions of them. However, in my opinion, the students who want to study aborad should grasp every chance, hence the high-education instittutions should offer every kind of help to them. With the assistance from the uinversities/colleges, some students would realize their dream of studying aborad and experincing more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2698.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00556586271 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24642988053 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408163265306 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.0 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9068482769 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4583333333 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191942447383 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713349085671 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406638437387 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13554774713 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272990242363 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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