The best way to prepare the young ones for leadership in government is to help them see both side of the games namely competion and cooperation. But then, while it seems true that competition has some beautiful advantages, I wiil agree that cooperation does more than what competion will do.
Firstly, cooperation helps to foster unity amidst leaders. I will question that of what essence is leadership if the leadership is breeding hatred or division through competion in their governance! competition if not bridle could lead to aniliation of the group and might engender hatred and division amidst the leaders. Also, coooperation leads to genuine peace in any organistion. While it might be true also that leaders could compete and still expereince a serene form of government, I will argue that in the atmosphere of cooperation, another exceeding glory of peace would fill such society or organisation.
Secondly, I agree that cooperation helps to acheive more in little time. yet again, it might seem tempting to believe that competion will not in any ways limit how much could be achieved, nevertheless in cooperating leadership, more is achieved in little time. This is because, the energy of individual is chanelled into same commission. They are concerned with one thing at a time. The whole team of leaders is coming to make quota into a single development. Different perpestive is available into how the governemt can be the best, not just for self glorification, but to foster the development of the nation. The white house consists of parties with different view and ideologies, but the success is more acheived in the government because of the unity in their propostition.
Morealso, cooperation might exist in the midst competion. Cooperation does not limit competiion, but cooperatiion will ensure that even the competiion is for the betterment of the leaders and not such that would exclude the progress of the team just for personal gain.
So, I conclude that cooperation is an essental ingredient to goood leadership. without it, they might not be able to point to any success. we haave good science today becaude of the cooperation amidst them. of course, there exist commpetiton, nevertheless, coopertion has made much succcess in little time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17073170732 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96273766962 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.3314583182 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.421052632 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111263087865 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034195516408 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259969155824 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663231916172 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287902064732 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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