"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
Corporations tries to maximize profit but doing that they creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. A successful company will always tries to maximize their profit because all shareholders of that company wants profits to maximize.
But in maximizing profits, they creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation. Many times we have seen, a employee working hard all those years in a single company, but doing period of uncertainty in economy, big corporations fires their most loyal employees. Apart from previous example, many a times we have seen company considering their employee just as a cattle, entitled to work for their company. Employees are not given due respect and if a employee revolt against the injustice, he is warned and admonished of getting fired from his job.
Additionally, in order to maximize profit, companies need to lower the operational cost of running their company. Lowering the cost of operation involves truncating their wage budget. So company maximizing their profit is inversely commensurate to decreasing their wage budget. Walmart is a very good example for the previous case. Many citizens of America revolted against the most revenue generating company. Walmart always featured first on fortune 500, but their is internal dissent against the company policies.
Also, big hospitals in order to maximize profit, sometimes delay the recovery of the patient. As patients are quite naive in the field of medicine, they have no option but to listen to their doctor. Now a doctor may prescribe a multi-vitamin tablet, which has nothing to do with the patient disease, but doctor has prescribed the multi-vitamin tablet in order to earn some commission by helping it sell.
Nevertheless, there have been some example, where maximizing profits for a corporation tantamount to collective good for it's employees. In a fledgling startup, earlier employees are given minor stake in the startup. We have also seen some employees getting compensation proportional to company performance in a given financial year.
Companies will always tries to maximize their profit, as all shareholders and stakeholders have this goal. They invested their money in order to earn more money. This will create conflict with the welfare of the nation. Employees wages will be small in order to reduce operation cost. But few early employees of startup will also get benefited with increased revenue of the startup.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
... to maximize profit but doing that they creates conflict with the general welfare of th...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
...large. A successful company will always tries to maximize their profit because all sh...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...ize. But in maximizing profits, they creates conflict with the general welfare of th...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of the nation. Many times we have seen, a employee working hard all those years i...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...yees. Apart from previous example, many a times we have seen company considering their ...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (cattle)' or simply 'cattle'?
Suggestion: a (cattle); cattle
...pany considering their employee just as a cattle, entitled to work for their company. Em...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...loyees are not given due respect and if a employee revolt against the injustice, ...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ways featured first on fortune 500, but their is internal dissent against the company...
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Line 7, column 399, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sells'?
Suggestion: sells
...r to earn some commission by helping it sell. Nevertheless, there have been some ...
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Line 11, column 23, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
...nancial year. Companies will always tries to maximize their profit, as all shareh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31713554987 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78667710706 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50895140665 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.850816504 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3913043478 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164216371852 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651154063548 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10611060341 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102379034904 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751416187906 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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