"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
With growing increase in respect for popularity and riches, people are getting greedy. The corporations are the paragon of being avarice. The prompt suggests that in order to increase profits, the corporations are hurting the general welfare of the nation. In my opinion, this recommendation is perfectly valid for three reasons discussed below.
Firstly, the aim of any non-profitable corporation or organization is to be at the apex in their respective fields. The corporations are often greedy and are indifferent towards public and therefore, towards their nation itself. For example, Volkswagen motors renowned for their comfortable and budget friendly cars have been recently accused of polluting the environment. The corporation installed a secret microchip into the exhaust of the car thereby when inspected the pollution caused by the automobile seems under limits. In fact, it was demonstrated that these vehicles where not only responsible for the increase in pollution but also released some detrimental gases into the atmosphere like carbon dioxide, carbon mono-oxide and sulphurous gases.
Secondly, due to the growing competition in the society the corporations are keenly interested in backdoors which will increase the turn-over of the company. The corporations try to attract wide range of consumers by limiting the price of goods which affects the manufacturing process indirectly. For instance, Maggi a product of famous noddle making company Nestle has been banned in India and several other countries. It was later revealed that in order to attract more consumers the company decided to use lead as an ingredient in the noodles which when consumed is life threatning.
Thirdly, the corporations provide employment to the upper and lower middle people of the society with minimum wages. They force their employees to work for ten hours a day with wages barely sufficient to feed three or four members in a family. The employees are not given proper healthcare or any incentives some of which are mandatory. To illustrate the above statement let’s consider Amazon delivery services. This corporation has been found guilty for not paying their employees even a minimum wage. The multi-national company has been charged with two billion pounds. This is the perfect example how companies take advantage of the naive public.
In conclusion, the critics often respond to these allegations obliquely referring to the quality products and increase in the employment due to these corporations. But these remarks do not match the harm the corporations have inflicted on people. It is therefore necessary to take certain severe action against these companies when found guilty of crime.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47380952381 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92874176818 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57380952381 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0912364054 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9565217391 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2608695652 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119302184698 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037004551735 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456327847668 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065864704841 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404517722025 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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