Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be

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Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs.

Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.

Discussing controversial topics can open the door to a multitude of interesting opinions and facts. But when discussed with individuals who have contrasting views , it may seem not so useful as one might think. Because very few people are willing to let go of their beliefs and the ground that they stand on just over a debate.

It is every single individuals right to have their own set of opinions on a topic that is in question. But when it involves having to change your opinion on something that you very dearly believe in , it may prove to be difficult. For example, when people converse on topics surrounding politics, it is very unlikely to see someone shift sides immediately. That is because that person is loyal and he knows his material. In his head the party that he supoorts might be doing the right thing and sometimes when an individual gets questioned about his or her intent towards the party that he supports, it may lead to heated conversations, unruly behaviour along with some bridges being broken among individuals who were past friends.

When discussing controversial topics it is important to note that as an individual you need only focus on laying your facts to set your ground and nothing else. Focusing on changing a person's contrasting views to your convenience is useless as in most cases you will not get the result you so dearly wish to have. Consider yourself in the same position and try to approach the situation from his or her perspective. Having done so you will realise that it is unlikely for you to choose the opposite side because you know deep down that the side that you are on is right and the same goes to the other person.

Having said so, it is also important to have an open mind when discussing about controversial topics because sometimes you may be wrong and it could lead to gargantuan problems. For example let's say you are talking about the incident that happened in the United States a few months ago when the cops harrased a black man. Now in your opinion it may seem like the cop was right in doing so, because he thought the person was a potential threat. But later evidences proved that he wasn't questioned due to that. The cop's actions were considered racial and abusive and you having said the cop is right puts you on the wrong side. In such cases being amenable might be benficial.

Hence I would conclude and say that discussing controversial topics with those having contrasting views is useless , but at the same time if the person is willing to have an open mind, it could prove to be good for both parties.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, for example, talking about, you know, in most cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64628820961 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55533110638 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475982532751 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.956401519 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1052631579 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346228256104 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106181559992 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593845089044 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211963022285 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464757902478 0.0667264976115 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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