Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Education is the the most precious boon gifted to the human being. Education flourish the life of oneself with a meaning. The educational institutions plays a vital role in delivering the education to the new generations and make them independent thinkers. I believe though the lucrative careers fascinates everyone, but this is a matter of fact that success or development is not bounded to it. So, I would partially disagree with the above issue.
The education is the only tool that avails thinking power to living beings. The learning process is the stratergy that differentiates human from other life forms on earth and grant them position of superiority. But, without an insight of usability of tool it would be waste to acquire it. Is the only focus of learning and education to acquire high-salary paid jobs? Isn't it necessary to find the inner strengths, the career contributing to happiness and development? Wasn't it a good decision by owner of Mcdonald's to sell food products at the age of 65 without guaranteed job safety? It may be matter of fact but I believe job that is responsible for development stands at the position of more superiority than those offering profit.
The educational institutions and teachers are always considered at a respectable position in society as they directs their lives for transferring the knowledge to new generations and preparing them for future. But, while doing this they must be aware that they have been assigned the duty of making the students capable to identify their way of living and not to decide the career for the students. In a movie named 'Pathshala', same situations and its consequences are beauitfully narrated. In the movie, the principle in ambition for the growth of school, tries to overburden the students with different activities and that result in suffering students and teacherfrom extreme stress. Thus, the educational institutes must understand their roles precisely and follow it sincerely.
Life have some necessities that need to be fulfilled. It is responsibility of the earning person to earn a living for himself and the family. The acquisition of basic needs such as food, money, wearings and house is right of each person. Though the ethics, values and likings have a position of honour in one's life, but needs are of higher priority. I remember the situation in which I have to take a job in order to support my family, even if I was much inclined towards going for higher studies. The life sometimes expects sacrifices and checks your stability in such situations.
The importance of factor may change from person to person, but I am to the view that one must not compromise his ethics, values and likings no matter what the situation is or thinking about consequences. Though sometimes life push us down, but at the same time it offers us with new opportunity to rise as well. One must make a choice based on their insights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
Education is the the most precious boon gifted to the human ...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'flourishes'.
Suggestion: flourishes
...on gifted to the human being. Education flourish the life of oneself with a meaning. The...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Education) must be used with a third-person verb: 'flourishes'.
Suggestion: flourishes
...on gifted to the human being. Education flourish the life of oneself with a meaning. The...
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Suggestion: play
...a meaning. The educational institutions plays a vital role in delivering the educatio...
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Suggestion: Isn't
...ation to acquire high-salary paid jobs? Isnt it necessary to find the inner strength...
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Suggestion: Wasn't
...tributing to happiness and development? Wasnt it a good decision by owner of Mcdonald...
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Suggestion: direct
...respectable position in society as they directs their lives for transferring the knowle...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...recisely and follow it sincerely. Life have some necessities that need to be fulfil...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nd likings have a position of honour in ones life, but needs are of higher priority....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2425.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 490.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94897959184 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86098939324 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524489795918 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1128099767 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2692307692 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205843876655 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482343754243 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569330345517 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107092513979 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951258662878 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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