Claim In any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership

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Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.

The leader is the person that is responsible for all the decision took by group one is leading and its future consequences. The leader is expected to be sensible, equality-loving, open to new ideas and deprived of arrogance. The above claim and reason points to direction of revitalization of leadership to assure the success of the enterprise. Though this could have been proved true in some situations, but it carries its own demerits as well.
The claim makes a point that in any field undergoing revitalization of leadership is profitable. One thing is no person is born with leadership quality it is gained from the experience. One must go through many upbringing and downgrading situations to understand the importance of leader and attain their responsibility properly. Some fields such as research and development asks for dedicated time for the field. Some projects proves to be extremely complex to be resolved in only a short duration of 5 years. The former president of India Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam being called as 'The missile man' was involved in many vital project of Defense. He in his autobiography has mentioned that some projects took around 10-15 years to attain the success. Thus, he was thankful to be in power for such a long duration. Thus, before considering all the cases such statement is not acceptable.
The leadership revitalization expects the current leader to step down and pass all his authorities to some new person. This may prove sometimes useful as the new person with his intelligence may understand and overcome the lack of the current leader. But, mostly the newcomers may face excessive difficulties to gain such a level of perfection. Getting acquainted to the responsibility of leaders would seem to be difficult for him. Other thing is the colleagues find it hard to adjust with new boss and would act abruptly. The best example can be a character of the series 'Mirzapur', in which after the death of former Chief Minister of State, his brother is looked upon as next Chief Minister. But, due to his unethical practices, everyone including the public becomes uncomfortable accepting his leadership. Thus, stepping down from the leadership position does not helps always.
The reason for the given claim tells us that best path for the success of the enterprise is the revitalization of new leader. But, on such statement one must ask whether the only key to success is the revitalization of leader? The success mostly depends on the innovating techniques organization adopts, how often newcomers are given chance, behaviour of bosses with the co-workers and others. The best example for such situation is the leading entrepreneur of India and owner of 'Tata group of companies', Mr. Ratan Tata. He is an ideal example of leadership and even after long duration of leading the company have successful to grow the company to greater heights. Thus, consideration of other factors responsible for success is necessary before making such claim.
Finally, the only thing one must understand is the revitalization of new leadership must only be looked up as a scheme to flourish the success of the orgranization and not as only key to success.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to new ideas and deprived of arrogance. The above claim and reason points to direct...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'prove'.
Suggestion: prove
...cated time for the field. Some projects proves to be extremely complex to be resolved ...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'prove'.
Suggestion: sometimes prove
...uthorities to some new person. This may prove sometimes useful as the new person with his intel...
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Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...n from the leadership position does not helps always. The reason for the given claim...
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Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: CHANCE_CHANGE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...n adopts, how often newcomers are given chance, behaviour of bosses with the co-worker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, may, so, thus, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2654.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 527.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03605313093 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98407232874 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489563567362 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 826.2 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.653656938 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8214285714 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235267143106 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064509096215 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719381741993 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126724277976 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338376638176 0.0667264976115 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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