The author of the statement claims that educational institutions should require all the students with incentives which can trigger them to study in a field in which they can find jobs related to that field of study and as a result, they can earn more money.
I fundamentally agree with the statement in that there should always be an incentive for selecting a definite goal. In this situation, the institutes are going to create more reason for choosing more satisfactory selection. In supporting my opinion, I have some reasons that I try to delineate them below.
Firstly, as all of us know the fact that Money talks in this competitive world all the humans are trying to earn more to experience a more facilitated life and enjoy living. If someone challenges are not situated in an appropriate way, he/she will soon get exhausted as all the efforts he/she had done led to a futile future. To make my point more lucid, I can make an example in which a person has studied in a major that it is not demandable in the society where he lives so, he is making much effort seeking a suitable job but he cannot find any. In this case it may come to his mind that he is not useful for society and also for himself, he cannot do something useful; moreover he become depressed and the effect of it is on both the person as a member of society and also the society. The society has lost a person with much potentiality and considers it as useless.
The other reason I believe students should make their choices more practical and comprehensive is that lucrative jobs make economic situation of that society fertile. The more money being transferred between the people in society the more vibrant that society will be. In supporting this, as the people in a society earn more money it can have more benefits such as creating more jobs and more opportunity to the youth seeking for a job. In addition, they can learn more about the ways of earning money.
To put it in a nutshell, I believe if people get more aware of factors influenced by choosing right choice of study and consequently their future job in which they know more about its future and have a vast perspective of its advantage or disadvantage they can act more beneficial than the people who does not have any idea about their future career.
Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... If someone challenges are not situated in an appropriate way, he/she will soon get exhausted as all ...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...omic situation of that society fertile. The more money being transferred between th...
^^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...aware of factors influenced by choosing right choice of study and consequently their ...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204545454545 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.161363636364 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931818181818 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0431818181818 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0795454545455 0.0444667217837 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134090909091 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58137429685 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113636363636 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0340909090909 0.0249443105267 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136363636364 0.0148568991511 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2297.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 412.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57524271845 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300970873786 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211165048544 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138349514563 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0970873786408 0.132149295362 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58137429685 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 219.290929204 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478155339806 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 52.0874639965 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 29.4285714286 23.380412469 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6945788139 59.4972553346 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.071428571 141.124799967 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 23.380412469 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.674092028746 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 50.5450762829 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.368 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348734375392 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163751194963 0.123202303941 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0916150097423 0.077325440228 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633116160919 0.547984918172 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180909401294 0.149214159877 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159774686849 0.161403998019 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613526710231 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322654141142 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0796952039492 0.0692045440612 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245207286565 0.275328986314 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616859996239 0.0653680567796 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... If someone challenges are not situated in an appropriate way, he/she will soon get exhausted as all ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...omic situation of that society fertile. The more money being transferred between th...
^^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...aware of factors influenced by choosing right choice of study and consequently their ...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204545454545 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.161363636364 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931818181818 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0431818181818 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0795454545455 0.0444667217837 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134090909091 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58137429685 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113636363636 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0340909090909 0.0249443105267 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136363636364 0.0148568991511 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2297.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 412.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57524271845 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300970873786 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211165048544 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138349514563 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0970873786408 0.132149295362 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58137429685 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 219.290929204 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478155339806 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 52.0874639965 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 29.4285714286 23.380412469 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6945788139 59.4972553346 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.071428571 141.124799967 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 23.380412469 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.674092028746 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 50.5450762829 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.368 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348734375392 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163751194963 0.123202303941 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0916150097423 0.077325440228 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633116160919 0.547984918172 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180909401294 0.149214159877 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159774686849 0.161403998019 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613526710231 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322654141142 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0796952039492 0.0692045440612 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245207286565 0.275328986314 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616859996239 0.0653680567796 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.