Laws are important parts of a society. Laws help people to live together in a calm and justified society. Some people may believe that every person has his own responsibility regarding obeying or disobeying laws just based on his judgment; others disagree. In my view, this not a good idea that every individual decides whether obey a law or not for three important reasons.
First, people do not have enough knowledge to know whether a particular law is a just one or not. A society includes different people living together, children, youths, adults, people with disability, etc. It is impossible to require them to learn basic information about how to understand if the law should be obeyed. On the other hand, if they are not familiar with these structures, they are not eligible to decide. It must be considered that even if we want people to study these laws, does the government have to consider a certain age? Does the government itself have to hold some course? If so, will the government teach these course impartially?
Second, if every person makes his own decision regarding evaluating the law, this may lead to irregularity. There are different people living in a society. They have their own religions and points of view so if every person wants to have his view regarding a certain law, no one can live in such a society. A law may would be a just person while it would be unjust for another one. As a matter of fact, there is not concrete reference to judge if a law is just or not.
In addition, some people such as felons can take advantage of this situation. They may have their own opinions and try to find some bad laws and consider those as just laws. This can lead to increase in crime in the society.
In sum, some people may think that it would be a good idea that every person has its judgment regarding a law but it would be detrimental rather than beneficial. Not only it is not possible but also can be harmful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, while, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6217765043 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56394961987 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481375358166 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3609185093 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8095238095 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240086203232 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06622323939 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670430152919 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133269187782 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878804102134 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.