Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure

Justice and injustice are the two bitter facts of a living society. There is no meaning of justice if there is no existence of justice. So, there is continued struggled between justice and injustice since the establishment of human civilization. There are uncountable war were prevailed in the name of revolution against the injustice. This fact illustrates that there is continued to resist injustice by scholar people. So, of course, as being wise human of a 21st century, we should have to obey just and disobey unjust laws and culture. If necessary, we should have to be ready to resist unjust.

The first reason for my belief is that society is for all: for poor or rich, for white or black, for disable and able, for men and women. All should have equal right to continue there life without discrimination. However, in some society, we can get many unjust laws are prevailing for a different group of people. For example, in some undeveloped country still, there is no provision for a woman to set citizen to her young child with her identity. This has been bringing the melancholy moment to many single women in a society. Don't you think that this provision is unjust? Of course, yes. If still the erudite person these societies do not resist, it will be continued longer.

The second reason for my belief is that the indicator of the civilized person is the ability to distinguish just and unjust, good and bad, light and dark etc. If we live our personal life only and do not care about the nearer peoples' convenience and inconvenience than there will not be a great distinction between a man and an animal. Actually, civilization was initiated with the motto of taking care of all people with some just laws.

Moreover, If you once obey the laws, which you found as unjust, will continue further as a tradition and culture. On the opposite side, if we resist in the meantime, it will be corrected at the time and the society will go further with the advancement of justice.

By making a long story short, everyone in a civilized society should have to care about the unjust laws are prevailing or not in their territory. To keep themselves smart and civilized they have to make a habit to obey altruistic laws and disobey with resist to unjust laws.

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Suggestion: Don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72292191436 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6184821086 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496221662469 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8782800694 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2272727273 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68181818182 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197455617011 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590158344562 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656579545627 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122000567327 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533414986906 0.0667264976115 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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