In accordance with the topic, the credibility of the first statement which associates its claim with the people who goad the importance of funding towards the art by the government is quite symbolic to the importance of arts and values to the society. Because they are not only exhorting that the funding is important but also the prominence of art in todays milieu of travail jobs.
If art is incarnated then it might be in a form of a pristine embodiment. The multifarious approach towards the culture depicted by it can baffle few people who were far away from a gentry life. This can be buttressed with a proof of example i.e. a farmer and a person with innate affinity towards art visit an art museum , the farmer can only look at the motley of the poster but the later person can identify the elysian impact of the art. This rudimentary difference of opinion arises when there is no knowledge of a certain province to someone.
Albeit the availability of art to all people might have a significant effect on it making it a platitude expression of thought ,the advantages in contrast are of a cornucopia. The common man ,if has the access to the art ,his boundary of knowledge might have a substantial growth where as to few it may be inconsequential. But the ones that are affected in positive way would have a variegated approach towards life. The second statement of the issue belies this advantage.
However, when art is made to a public display, it might be arduous in endorsing encomium to the subject. This can be an internecine effect which must be considered by the government and also a simple solution like having notepads describing the art should solve this conundrum. The perplexed minds of novice art lovers can be ephemeral if the solution is imbued in museums.
The funding if alive can make a change in considerable amount of people’s lives. This makes it a possibility which has copious advantages. If implemented in a right way without maing the art forms an insipid version to luddites, can actually make them understand the prominence of it on a society which is pellucid in the history books of today. Hence ,even if the funding makes the integrity of art deleterious, with few precautions it can be brought into a right path.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he prominence of art in todays milieu of travail jobs. If art is incarnated th...
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...t in todays milieu of travail jobs. If art is incarnated then it might be in a...
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...rast are of a cornucopia. The common man ,if has the access to the art ,his bounda...
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...owledge might have a substantial growth where as to few it may be inconsequential. But t...
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... has copious advantages. If implemented in a right way without maing the art forms an insipid ...
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...cid in the history books of today. Hence ,even if the funding makes the integrity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, as to, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76903553299 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83606909906 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510152284264 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3735732026 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00865163597465 0.243740707755 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00408407517737 0.0831039109588 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00914430290678 0.0758088955206 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00518881283396 0.150359130593 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00426962433685 0.0667264976115 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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