The statement of opinion that is being developed in the issue above is quite equivocal. However, one thing can be contended that in order to judge the topic, mere facts and a little bit of work in the brains would be suffice. It would be acerbic to a college milieu if they neglect the topics that are just outside the vicinity of the course requirements. The ideology of not teaching the students about the unrelated topics would be a hindrance to the growth of the student.
The credence of the first statement can be proved with the help of few historical examples. The study of nuclear physics which was a recondite arena to the most people in 18th century was surmounted by a renown noble laureate Mr.x. He developed the atom bomb for the destruction of people who waged wars against his country. Well, at least his formula was used in it. So it created chaos among the people. This might have a plethora of reasons to justify his acts, but many peace conservationists state that this was a sheer act of terrorism. In a clear speculation we can infer that Mr.X was not aware of the consequences that were going to be created albeit inadvertently he left a mark of horror in the books of history.This shows the values that were short in the mind of Mr.X. Had he received a copious amount of ethical values in his life he would not have made his hands sodden with blood.
Not just the platonic stories of people that makes the first supposition a valid one, but also the mere acts of vandalism those which are an impute of dearth values in the colleges. Common sense- one would declare this to be regular or a banal term. But this has an abysmal meaning to it. When tots come to the stage of suffrage they must be able to lead a elysian life. This would be a possibility only if the cradle of modern education i.e. the colleges would provide a required medium.
Nevertheless the fact that the most scientists lack a convivial attitude, yet they served humanity more makes us think about the righteousness of ignoring extraeneous subjects in Universities. Albeit the scientists achievements in the history books make us perplexed to their minds, when one studies the history or these so called "highly educated people" a cornucopia of facts can be revealed in them. When the elite scientists are considered to be the subject , most of them lack a common thing in their life, that is the "life" itself. They forget to live. The distrait attitude towards family of Sir Albert Einstein is well known to the mankind. All these cynosures of scientific world makes us think again about the quality of education that is being taught at the pinnacle age of a human.
Considering all the facts and the visage of modern era , a negative connotation flows in every human i.e. Common sense.As stated about this is a term that has to be underscored in the pages of college handbooks , because this makes a luddite to a scholar, a cantankerous citizen to a responsible one, a gloomy student to a person who could manage things. Hence it is important to have knowledge in every field up to the mark where it is quite necessary to live in this multifarious world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: little; bit
...er to judge the topic, mere facts and a little bit of work in the brains would be suffice....
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... mark of horror in the books of history.This shows the values that were short in the...
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... mere acts of vandalism those which are an impute of dearth values in the colleges. Commo...
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... But this has an abysmal meaning to it. When tots come to the stage of suffrage they...
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...scored in the pages of college handbooks , because this makes a luddite to a schol...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...nt to a person who could manage things. Hence it is important to have knowledge in ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2618.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70399546398 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516934046346 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.6881510862 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.826086957 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3913043478 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34782608696 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0681634292626 0.243740707755 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199172958836 0.0831039109588 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032940928106 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420638501393 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025766014689 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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