Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Many people have argue that the formal education may kills the creativity of a kid. In my case when I was young, I strongly agreed with this statement and even developed hostile attitude towards formulated study content. Untill I grew older, I see how the fundimental knowledge from the former learning foster my free mind and my spirit.
In the past, I thought a customized education can fit each kids better than formal education. one standard for all can be brutal for some and benefitial for others, which is unfair. students who are discouraged from their performance in the school may lost their confident to learn new things, which further undermine their minds and spirits. Different factors may lead to underperformance, and only customize the education system can fit for everyone.
Later, I realized that without formal education, it is hard to tell what the students are good at and what they prefer to learn. By unify the learning process at the beginning, we can see how one performs and how we can curve their needs and will to learn in the future. Author can't write a book without learning the language, right?
Secondary, all creativity that are groundbreaking based on one's former knowledge in the field. minds and spirited are rootless if they are derailed from the track. From formal education, we can know how the world is functioning as we gain our righteous spirit, which is essential to help the society. Scientists make new discovery based on their past knowledge, nevertheless some findings may prove earlier theory wrong, they still need to have a fundamental knowledge to know what they are facing. Einstein may not able to debate Newton's theory without learning it from his former education.
Consequently, formal education not necessary restrain one's minds and spirits, instead, it opens up the way towards fruitful possibility in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ntal knowledge from the former learning foster my free mind and my spirit. In the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06109324759 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74358126152 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3221225827 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.375 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137830838248 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478839972554 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351856354308 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797296353706 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371202883621 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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