The Educaton is important part of everyone's life. Education is not only that we learnt in school, colleges or unniverties but also what we learnt for anyone, anything around us or any experiences.The education that we took in schools or coleges is kind of formal education that we must take for constructing the base of life.
I am disaggree to more extent that formal education tends to restain our minds and spirit rather thna set them setting them free. The concept of fomal education is they have a pattern which is formed over years of
experience considering what is needed to student in thier childhood, what things should they understand? What is moral,ethecal and what s not? kind of things are taught in fomal education to childern along with how to behave, talk, read, write? what to do ? what not to do? if your not knowing what are you? what things you should follow? how to let your mnd free if don't know what is good and bad? This is all part of disciplene and morality but not restaining our minds.
Supporting to above, Now a days there are various disciplines in formal education system like art, sports, etc. encouraging student to elaborate thier hidden talents. for example. Our college has a club of students named "Art circle" where they learn and perform all the things such as dance, drama, drawing along with what you want to do? all these are coming under extra-currricular activities. College also encouraged
such activity. No one restrained us.
Aprt from this, A thought that can challenge is above explanation is regarding to acedemices.
As mention in above paragraph, formal education system are having the pattern design by expert that they thought as standard that each student must follow even if students don't have any interest in that. They are not allowed to choose what they like and discard what not ? but this is case till your school education only. after that you are free to choose your stream where want to build your carrier by follwing
your passion or by traditonal standard no one is restaining you.
Finally, what I think is that formal education is not restraining your spirits and minds instead they are are providing a track that should consider while following your mind in disciplenary way.
- Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized. 50
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, regarding, so, while, for example, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91168831169 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65238649849 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52987012987 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.2351934574 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7916666667 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0416666667 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237579798739 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569602256235 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122160910515 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114008568875 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148576963508 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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