The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The measure of greatness of a nation has been a long debated topic for centuries. Any one in this world would want to see their nation achieve greatness and they are willing to work hard for it. But the prompt question us that what is the measure of greatness, how can it be defined. There can be many different definitions depending on the thinking process of different individuals. In my opinion, the happier and the healthier the citizens of the country, more the greatness of the nation. Still I don't think my opinion to be hundred percent true. I will explain the topic using some examples.
If we start measuring the greatness of a nation based on it's achievements then the whole world will enter a rat race. No rest, no peace just the race of achieving one's goal. Is this the world we want. As an example United states has the highest achievements in the world compared to any other nation in most of the fields. But is every citizen of USA happy? Does every citizen of USA is taken good care of? The answer is obviously no. Many people in USA are homless, unemployed. Teh crime rate in USA is also increasing day by day. The rape cases are increasing and so on. Only a few who managed to fulfill their goals live a luxury life. Others still need to struggle for the basic amenities and work their ass off to provide for thier family. All this indicate that in the race of becoming great USA has forgotten what it takes to happy. On the other hand switzerland not the greatest in world in terms of achievements but is considered the happiest world in the nation. The goverement ensures welfare of their people, be it education or healthcare or food or shelter. Everyone has access to this basic amenities which makes the USA citizen to migrate to switzerland. In my opinion it is teh greatest nation in world.
But again some might disagree that without achievements there will be no competition and the human race will never able to achive the scientific knowledge they recieved over years. This can infact be also true but this again leads to a question what good are the achievements if they do not benefit our own people. Hence this a complex issue to be adressed and will forever remain in debate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, as for, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55388471178 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50677939597 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6920596151 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2962962963 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92592592593 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133570042676 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350747033262 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416122321109 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085495461104 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387210082251 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 48.8420337079 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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