To measure nations significance development of its people plays a crucial role rather than acquirement of its rulers,artists,scientists.In my opinion growth of a country is directly proportional to progress of people as a country is nothing but a cluster of people.
A country is called developed only when it meets requirements of all people such as education, health care,employment opportunities etc. Educating every individual ,providing jobs , accomodation which makes every human being to work hard and raise standard of living. A nation is nothing but a summation of people if every individual embroil in some work and behave like maverick that will automatically leads to growth of a country.
As a countries growth is measured in terms of literacy,population ,standard of living ,economy one being educated will strive his best to headway nation.welfare is required in all aspects so people involved in every work should play their best role in optimum development of a country.some people claim that rulers ,scientists are responsible for nations growth, as far as i am concerned they are only a part of countries improvement, if people of certain nation are in developed phase then growth of countries is billion times greater than scientists,artists,because artists ,scientists are subset of people.
To sum up, positive improvement in every individual of a country leads to growth of certain country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44343891403 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83493154348 2.79657885939 137% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.720184764 60.3974514979 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.5 118.986275619 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8333333333 23.4991977007 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161796399509 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745113648569 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628662685697 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969615266956 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669083279164 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 14.1392134831 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.