What makes a nation great? I personally disagree with the claim that general welfare of citizen’s is a better indicator of nation’s greatness than achievements of rulers, artists or scientist. I believe that both of these factors are crucial in determining nation's status. Both of these factors have determined fate of various nations in history. Although general welfare of people is of more importance for ensuring social, economic and cultural progress is on a positive track but there are various other factors that also contribute to nation's glory.
United States is one of the best examples that has delineated the fact that nation can make a leap in progress when social well-being of people is ensured and significant achievements in field of science, arts and technology is made. It was industrial revolution that revolutionized European nations and made them economically strong which in turn improved well-being and welfare of their people. Thus it is evident from historical instances that achievements in science, politics and arts can lead to improved well-being of nation's citizen.
But the progress in such fields can be made given that general lifestyle of people is in good condition. Certain countries such as North Korea give least importance to welfare of people and instead has invested its entire funds into research of warfare such as nuclear ballistic missiles. In such extreme scenarios the nation is surely not going to progress and this makes it evident that without good welfare of its citizen no nation can progress even if it is focussed on achieving success in fields of science or any other domain. Another example of Idi Amin dictator of Uganda who was least concerned about well-being and was constantly in greed of power. His rule was characterized by rampant human right abuses, corruption, ethnic persecution. This led to degradation of Uganda's condition and Uganda went into extreme economic hardships. This example makes it clear that both general welfare of people and achievements in field of politics, science and arts go hand in hand and in absence of one other cannot flourish.
One can argue that general welfare of people is the most important factor to judge a nation's greatness but this extreme claim cannot be justified. We have examples of great scientific innovations that have dramatically improved people’s lifestyle and made countries super powers of the world. If electricity would not have been discovered by Thomas Edison, people still would have been using gas lamps and industrial revolution would have not taken place if Nikola Tesla would have not come up with his idea of using alternating current in place of direct current. Ramanujan, an unorthodox mathematician put India into map of modern mathematics. Satyendra Nath Bose with his ground-breaking research on Bosons made India one of the important countries contributing to the field of Physics. Mangalyaan Mars orbiter mission added on to the glory of India in field of space research. Satyajit Ray won lifetime achievement Oscar award for is work in cinema.
From all this example it is clear that the advancement in field of politics, arts and science contributes greatly to nation's greatness as does the well-being and welfare of people of nation. Hence it is necessary for a country's leader to create a conducive environment for its people by good governance and welfare. This in turn encourages individuals to excel in their field of and bring glory and ensure well-being of his or her country and fellow citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2993.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 575.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2052173913 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8670872041 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48347826087 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 943.2 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0938237043 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.72 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251965866007 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770979291353 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964768771645 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154077028661 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865527987547 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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